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kynder
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since 2000-04-11
Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida

0 posted 2000-06-21 12:54 PM



So pretty to look at,
So nice to touch.
But sooner or later,
Every man will burn you
In his clutch.


*****kynder

The years teach much which the days never know. Ralph Waldo Emerson


© Copyright 2000 Kynder - All Rights Reserved
Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
1 posted 2000-06-21 01:31 PM


hey girl its JJ. i have not seen anything from you for awhile. great piece to come back with. i'm still your fan but i don't agree with this totaly there are a few good guys out there. their all not bad i'm a good guy i'm on your side i hate good for nothing but hurt kind of guys all my girl friends ever do is cry because of them see i'm a dying romantic and when i can longer write i can no longer live    
                  JJ

I'm the lord, I'm the havoc, I'm the soul



Hardrock
Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA
2 posted 2000-06-21 04:40 PM


Kynder.....I know.  And I understand.  Great piece of work.
On the personal side....you can't wrap your heart in asbestos, you can't turn from love and run....don't quench your fires of passion, stay cool and have some fun.  (Yeah, it's schamaltzy, but it's from the heart).  Hardrock

kynder
Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida
3 posted 2000-06-21 04:44 PM


oh my dear jj, i would love to rest upon your words and know that one day my knight will arrive, but ....... here i sit.  what is a girl to do????  thank God for written word, much like you, if i couldn't write, i would die.

kynder

A woman to a man is
But a mere chapter,
But a man to a woman
Is an entire book.--
Kynder Howell

Joel the wolf
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
4 posted 2000-06-21 10:35 PM


Hey Kynder, haha am I in that count??
I think JJ started to put up a good fight on this, so I'll carry the ball.
NO not every one!!!!!
Kynder sweet heart you are a book one that. has many pages.
And a very interesting cover page to. haha

Joel.

I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

kynder
Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida
5 posted 2000-06-21 11:27 PM


well hardrock, i try.  and when i don't succeed i try try again.  somehow i just keep keepin on.  thanks to this place for the most.  and my dear joel, no, hon, you aren't in that count!!  i am also saying in this that every man has burned or hurt a woman somehow, somewhere.  just like women have, but hey, i am biased!! hahahahahahaha and thank you for your kind comments!!! i love you guys.  the last 3 good ones on earth!!! one of you must be locked up, one must be married and the other gay!! lol!!!  i am in an onery mood today!! forgive me!!!!!!  is this the longest reply to date yet????     

kynder

A woman to a man is
But a mere chapter,
But a man to a woman
Is an entire book.--
Kynder Howell

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