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linda munday
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since 2000-06-17
Posts 315
Adelaide, Australia

0 posted 2000-06-21 02:18 AM


What can I say... PMT and Dr. Jeckyll and Mr. Hyde.

First the birth and then the slap
World deals out a lot of crap
Picks the time and picks the place
Then it shoves it in your face
Drags you down and ties you tight
Won't get through without a fight
Draws you in then spits you quick
Tries it's best to give you stick
Stuff the world and all it's hurt
Know you're just a sod of dirt.

Sorry guys... hope you all feel ok after this...lol

© Copyright 2000 Linda Munday - All Rights Reserved
Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
1 posted 2000-06-21 02:30 AM


i read it and still feel great because all your doing is stateing facts and there nothing wrong with that its the learning to live with it thats hard.

I'm the lord, I'm the havoc, I'm the soul



notlikely2
Member
since 2000-06-16
Posts 308
UK
2 posted 2000-06-21 10:07 AM


OUCH!!!
The truth really does hurt sometimes doesn't it...nice work though...I liked it...I think!!!

Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
3 posted 2000-06-21 10:48 AM


Oh but Linda we are so much more, your poem has a great ring of truth, but it's the fight that counts, for each breath we breathe.

Love the poem kid.
HHHHHHOOOOOOOWWWWWWWLLLLLLLing great review.
Joel

I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

4 posted 2000-06-22 09:02 AM


Hey...I like a good rant now and then...
sometimes you just gotta...

Colin
Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596
Callington, Cornwall, England
5 posted 2000-06-22 10:03 AM


Feel better now?  

Eric.

"We are the music makers and we are the makers of dreams." - Willy Wonka.

SpitFire
Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

6 posted 2000-06-22 10:14 AM


~Great big *Sigh*,....I do this often.  Have things I need to get off my chest and boy,...watch out. haha...this poem held truth behind it...I hope that today you see a smile and a sun beam on your face.  Really. Take care. *Peace.
Hardrock
Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA
7 posted 2000-06-22 07:01 PM


Linda....I loved it....now I'm gonna go slap the h*** out of myself....just in case someone else in the world missed their turn.  Great poem.....Hardrock
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
8 posted 2000-06-22 11:12 PM


We all feel this way from time to time, and a good venting always helps.  Good writing  

I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)


linda munday
Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 315
Adelaide, Australia
9 posted 2000-06-23 08:05 AM


Just wanted to let you all know that I'm fine really.
Thanks for the comments, they mean a lot.
Linda M.

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