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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
Depressing day's Have Taken their toll Divided from a Whole And can't find The piece's now Stole I'm the lord, I'm the havoc, I'm the soul |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
God JJ the days in my life I've been depressed lately, and are so lost, the pieces that have been stolen by this crud. you hit home on this one my friend. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
thanks joel for your replie and calling me your friend. i also do enjoy your work on here and tend to read them all. i've been feeling depressed lately to cause i might be moving. but i'm there for you if you need to talk to someone I'm the lord, I'm the havoc, I'm the soul |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Yeah, depressing days suck, hey? Put well here Jeremiah  |
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Bustem57 Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 98 |
I hate depressing days!! You hit it right on the spot. Good job!!! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Jeremiah, thanks for your comments on my post. This is so immediately to the point, and so true. Very good image in few words. |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
makes ya wanna be a thief, doesn't it? steal someone's elses pieces at an attempt to be whole, but illgotten gains never last long. jj, keep it up. the sun shines, sooner or later. just hope it doesn't burn ya, my friend. and btw, thanks for replying so much. you inspire me, truly. kynder The years teach much which the days never know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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