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ChibiDeathscythe Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 128 |
OK. I admit it. I used one of those poetry magnet kits to help make this, but it is still authentic....sometimes I just need a little help finding the words.... Approaching him who as life struggles is beneath an eden. "Summer?" I ask as if a sacred thing coaxed every secret off of his tongue. If peace did emerge I would say fully lick every palm but with temperature in soft song. This red vine reflecting wild love blue bloom a thick burst see my sprout wither for the eden freshest thing though so harder than the ground. A sanctuary air I possess "Suicides have already betrayed the body. Still born, they don't always die, bu dazzled, they can't forget a drug so sweet that even children would |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~You have put those little pieces together well. That little poem could have a dozen meanings. Very interesting. *Peace. |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
Yes i to see alot of meanings here but i seem to feel it more toward love. great work. I'm the lord, I'm the havoc, I'm the soul |
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gothicmoth Member
since 2000-06-05
Posts 89 |
I prefer the cut and paste technique myself. Don't downgrade your abilities. This is a lovely poem. |
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