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Joel the wolf
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp

0 posted 2000-06-18 02:44 PM


Swimming within blue waters of content
I find my mind completely spent
upon life of mystery loving of woes
the universe has taken it’s time
to show me it’s throws.

Ahhh, what was that,
again AAAAAHHHHHH!!!
what the hell was that,
piercing my heart with hooks
AAAAHHHhhhhhGGGOOODDDD!!!!

OH mother of mercy,???????????
PPPPPllllllleeeaasssseee!!!!!!!!
Have
Faith

No!

AAAAUUUUGGGGHHHH!!!!!
NNNNOOOTTT AAAgggaaaiiinnn???!!!
LLLEEETTT MMMEEE GGGOOO
GGGOOODDD!!!

LLLOOOVVVEEE
LLLEEEAAAVVVEEE
MMMEEE!!!!!
alone.

Joel


I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

© Copyright 2000 Joel. - All Rights Reserved
ChibiDeathscythe
Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 128

1 posted 2000-06-18 02:50 PM


Well the topic title sure got my attention (hehe). I hope you are ok! Sure looks like you might be stressed.

"Suicides have already betrayed the body.
Still born, they don't always die,
bu dazzled, they can't forget a drug so sweet
that even children would

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
2 posted 2000-06-18 03:54 PM


good poem but yes you seem stressed out but if so things will get better so please hang in there

I'm the lord, I'm the havoc, I'm the soul



SpitFire
Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

3 posted 2000-06-18 03:59 PM


~Oh crap!!!....Joel, this sounds like it's so right now,....so intensely burning.....shoot.  Let it out.  Eeekk,......ouch, see, I knew I didn't want to read this.....I didn't want to know you hurt.  Piddle!!!....I'll get you on ICQ to talk.  *Peace.
Click
Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202
USA
4 posted 2000-06-18 05:11 PM


Joel, I think I've lamented in the same way!! Thank God for not listening to us .without love we would not feel pain,the more we love the more it hurts!!


Click

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
5 posted 2000-06-18 06:24 PM


Joel hon *sigh* you are having a rough time of it at present aren't you?  please icq or email me to talk hon.  You can and will work through this, you will..... *hugs*

I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



Joel the wolf
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
6 posted 2000-06-18 09:31 PM


OK I'm not dead, I'm still swimming the water, just felt like a damn fish in caught in loves hooks. wanting to be let go, but not. you understand?? I hope so now you can explane it to me...
thanks for the?? thoughts.

Joel.

I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

tac
Junior Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 28
New Jersey
7 posted 2000-06-19 02:08 AM


God this is great.. I wish I could have written this one. It's how I feel most of the time lately.

Keep up the good work! I hope it works out for you.

"AAAAUUUUGGGGHHHH!!!!!
NNNNOOOTTT AAAgggaaaiiinnn???!!!
LLLEEETTT MMMEEE GGGOOO
GGGOOODDD!!!

LLLOOOVVVEEE
LLLEEEAAAVVVEEE
MMMEEE!!!!!
alone."


taramw
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738

8 posted 2000-06-19 06:08 AM


Wow! That must have been a wonderful release  
Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas
9 posted 2000-06-19 11:14 AM


Whoaaaaaaaaaaa Joel!!!! Ya freakin scared me     It always feels good to vent a lil eh?  

Peace


I do not love you for being perfect.....
I love you for being perfect for me!!



Joel the wolf
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
10 posted 2000-06-19 11:29 AM


Thank you Taramw, and yes it was.

D. K. W., thank you also,
"Whoaaaaaaaaaaa Joel!!!! Ya freakin scared me"  

hahahahaha hahahaha hahaha...
you are to much. kid. hahahaha

HHHHHHOOOOOWWWWWWLLLLLLHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA...
Joel.


I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

Walter Poe
Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787

11 posted 2000-06-20 10:40 AM


a release of pressurepent up emotion returned to the world in powerful emotion

Vanguard of the New Movement

Behind his polished cedar desk,
surrounded by his phones,
Sits Blazer Dyke(The yachting type),
The vanguard of the clones.
The Archetype,
The number one,The vanguard of the clones.

Crossing over busy street,
where noisy traffic drones,
Walks Blazer Dyke (without a bike),
The vanguard of the clones.
The autocrat,
The ectomorph,
The vanguard of the clones.

He strides across the cobbled yard,
Where pawn shops offer loans,
That Blazer Dyke (Whom i dislike),
The vanguard of the clones.
The cannibal,
The parasite,
The vanguard of the clones.

He passes through the wicket gate,
To churhyards full of bones,
That Blazer Dyke (on a midnight hike),
The vanguard of the clones.
The necrophile,
The narcissist,
The coprophage,
The sybarite,
The telepath,
The Anti-Christ,
The vanguard of the clones.

Robert Rankin
(The Dance of the Voodoo Handbag)

Joel the wolf
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
12 posted 2000-06-20 01:07 PM


Walter, Powerful emotion, isn't the word now, it's beyond that.
Thanks

Joel.

I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

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