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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA 
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Lovers drink from the open pool quench the thirst of ancient times temptation runs amok as the drinking trend began crystal of hope stands in the center from which the lovely potion expires light stand stills watching over no shade of heaven shall interfere time is growing ever so more the silence of quietness is to be heard a single hair falls in the pool extinguishes the reflection of timeless age present is gone, future is told, past is repeated gazing at the crystal focus is lost in the beauty lovers regain their drinking once more as the beating heart is set to a tone of stillness without no invitation happiness presents itself necessity things are now at hand now let the fun began. Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Yes love does run to freely without a focus in sight, lost in the beauty of it all. great poem kid. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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anomaly187 Member
since 2000-06-15
Posts 284San Francisco,CA,US |
yes a great poem..your writing is very true. "I'd listen to the words he'd say, but in his voice i heard decay. The plastic face forced to portray, all the insides left cold and gray. There is a |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Thank you for your kind words people. Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
yes truely a great poem. i would like to see more of you. I'm the lord, I'm the havoc, I'm the soul |
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hunter Junior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 22lex,ky |
great words..good thoughts both mixed well |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Beautifully expressed.  |
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sgreybe Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 209London, UK |
Great poem Xeonox Should be in the book The poetic flow and literary usage is wonderful. Keep it going! |
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