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lotharingia
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since 2000-06-04
Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany

0 posted 2000-06-16 10:23 AM


Shadow me
Follow me
Tell my lies

Mimic me
Be like me
Smile my smile

Mirror me
Wither me
Feel my pain

Adore me
Abhor me
Know my shame

Beguile me
Defile me
Make me cry

Kiss me
Resist me
Till I die
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 Lotharingia
"For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?"
Tom Holland





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taramw
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since 2000-06-08
Posts 738

1 posted 2000-06-16 10:37 AM


Powerful indeed!! Woah!  Very haunting Uta.
lotharingia
Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany
2 posted 2000-06-16 10:40 AM


except that I messed up the layout,   I hope it's better now!

 Lotharingia
"For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?"
Tom Holland


Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
3 posted 2000-06-16 02:38 PM


hell kid it just looks haunting.
the whole lay out is just great.
I like this.

Joel.

 I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
4 posted 2000-06-16 07:40 PM


Haunted secrets of the soul, love this!!!  

 I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



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