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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Someday she'll be in my place I can see the look on her face When she discovers the lies And feels like her heart dies It will happen to her I bet she is sure It will be different then But she won't know how she won't know when It is worse than she can think When from the cup of bitterness she drinks Goes down like poison in your throat Leaving behind evil's coat It will burn like hell's fire Satan will play hatred's lyre On his face an evil grin Knowing that you have sinned Then you will pay the price Not once or twice but thrice Your actions will be shown Then to all it will be known The kind of person that you are From heaven you'll be barred They have no place for your kind You'll never escape the tie that binds Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~LW,..I made it through, hehe. Wow,...this poem holds so much emotion. Gosh,..I'm glad that you got it out. Keep it flowing. This is one scary piece of poetry. So well written....with such a well deserved and haunting message. Take care of you. *Peace. |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
lone wolf... very well written and expressed but more than anything they are true words... what goes around comes around... you never have to wish bad for those to do bad... it's the circle of life... you get it all back... i wish everyone realised that so we all cold be good to each other ... lies hurt...i know it... my poem The box says just that... coincidentally...at the same time you're feeling the same... take care... you're doing just fine... If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Hmmm. Do the bad ones really get their comeuppance? Be good if they did! We all feel this way when someone hurts us really badly (I feel like that about my dad and I'll never be able to stop, no matter how I try). But don't forget that people usually don't behave like that because they want to hurt others, but simply because they're confused individuals who seek only their own happiness and do not have the capacity to take other people's feelings into account. Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
SF...Glad to see you made it!! hehe....I knew you would. Thank you very much. There was a lot of emotion behind i, but i am feeling better now. Take care too my friend. Avanti...So sorry that you relate to this. Would not wish it upon my worst enemy. It is awful. I believe it all does come back to you....you reap that which you sew. Always. Sounds as if you are doing fine too. Lotharingia...I think you are right...it is not intentional hurt, but it is hurt nonetheless. They all get their in the end....usually tenfold at least. Thanks. |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
well I hope he rots. yea I know about karma, very well, and freewill we all have it, So I have some different, ideas about hate. Anyway you can forgive him I won't. I have never abided with men that can do this they have no heart in life. no true spirit within. love ya kid. I'll howl lone enough to make his bones chill in the middle of the night. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
Great poem seems to be my same fate and comes from my own world I hope you post more work here for me to read. I'm the lord, I'm the havoc, I'm the soul |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Joel....I hope so too. No sure on the forgiveness part. Love ya too. Thanks for the howl...I hope he hears. Jeremiah....Thank you, sorry this is also your fate. Not an easy one at all. I do post here occasionsally...so keep an eye out.  LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Strong emotions here Lone Wolf!! Karma indeed exists, I've witnessed it too many times not to believe, but there are many avenues to Karma, like what goes around comes around, AND your wishing bad onto someone else. We the suffers have to be stronger, and not give in to the hatred, anger and jealousy, sure we have to work through it, but also always remain the optimum of good karma, peace and love. I know how hard these things hurt honestly, I have a problem myself at present, but still hard as it is I try to only send out, peace, forgiveness and understanding FOR IT IS BETTER for myself in the long run. Great work, have a hhhhhhhooooooooooowwwll it helps. I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Damned computer, I just want to add all that above was said with kindness and compassion, I don't want to be misconstrued ever again! LOL The feelings are real, painful and hard to deal with, but best dealt with by understanding and then moving on.. Just don't want to be misunderstand and writing responses sometimes it comes across the wrong way!! LOL  I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Lone Wolf and I discussed this and my comments, I meant that harbouring such feelings isn't a way to live your life generally. I was in no way saying that she was doing that and it was wrong. The poem is a good work that shows that we all get what we deserve in the end.. A good lesson actually!! I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Isis, Thank you for the chat and the three replies!!! LOL....wow!! Thanks for clarifying things and letting everyone know the lesson. Appreciate it. LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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