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DarkLisha
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since 2000-06-13
Posts 4


0 posted 2000-06-13 09:17 PM


Hello! I havn't been here in a really long time! I lost the link to hear and my password so I ended up having to get a new one. Well it's great to be back!
                   ~*Luv Always*~
                      Lisha


There goes my feelings again...flying in the dark night
The deep sky whispers my names and I scream out of spite
"You treat me like I'm nothing...like I don't mean a thing to your cold and shallow heart
Yet you lie that you want to "protect" me...keep my heart from eternal darkness
Your lies shall never set you free and in your eyes I see your lie *is* me
Come clean and tell me the truth, answer my questions as you said you would
Why do I feel such hate for this human race? Is this my fate that I see in the eyes of my one true enemy?
Who holds such power against purest of souls? Who keeps me from reaching my goals?
The human race makes me sick, soon it will all end...but what about those that I consider a friend?
What will I say to them? What happens when I say good-bye...will I even make them cry?
My true fears are nothing but unasnwered questions and uncertaintys that are left at the foot of my mind
Forever more in the dark I seek nothing more but the everlasting friendship that only a true hero can bring..."
The clouds fade away and I am left alone again, the face of darkness dissapears and once again there is light


 "True heros are found within darkness. I have yet to meet a knight who is deprived of being torn between dark and light."-DarkLisha

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taramw
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since 2000-06-08
Posts 738

1 posted 2000-06-13 11:06 PM


Woah Lisha! GREAT poem    Lots of expression here.
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 2000-06-13 11:18 PM


Welcome Back Lisha!!!  PP nice to come home to, to me it always feels like a homecoming! LOL
Great expression here hon,  

 I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



tac
Junior Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 28
New Jersey
3 posted 2000-06-14 01:02 AM


Beautifully written... I ride that rollercoaster of emotions all the time.

There is no order to my feelings or my pain. I look for balance between the darkness and the light... and live to see another day. We look for each other to fulfill that need for love and yet our words and own emotions get in the way. It's that unselfish soul we long for, that hero that will bring us out of the darkness. Yet, we must cling to that darkness, for without the darkness there can be no light.


[This message has been edited by tac (edited 06-14-2000).]

AVANTI
Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664
INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE
4 posted 2000-06-14 02:03 AM


very true thoughts...


 If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves
from which evolves the light...
Avanti Rao

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