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the Daughter betrayed by Her Darkness
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the Daughter betrayed by Her Darkness |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Where am I now? Lost amongst the crumbs Can you hear the calling? Whispering of my nameless face from here in this fog, to the end of this abyssal plain And it all sounds the same, yet I hunger for more I grow tired of these games forget the illusion, let's make it real And still I fear so many things, but none for love since I entered this place Here it comes again and again, and I ask, "What shall be brought to me today from the eastern sky?" Silence is it's answer, the only answer it can provide They've left me now, shapeless spirits no longer my guide < !signature--> Listen to your heart for it knows the way even when you don't. ~*Angel of Darkness*~ [This message has been edited by Dark Enchantress (edited 06-13-2000).] |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Dark Enchantress~ "Lost amongst the crumbs" (I want to eat this line.) "They've left me now, shapeless spirits no longer my guide" ( I just like this one, good to end on) Had to go back and read this again. It seems like you are already at the end as soon as you start reading. Flows over the rocks that stick up between the lines in this poem.  Joy |
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gothicmoth Member
since 2000-06-05
Posts 89 |
It's scary how much we think alike. Yes I saw myself in this poem too. You did an excellent job of getting into my head. Thanks for your wonderful replies to my poems. |
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Ember Junior Member
since 2000-06-06
Posts 10 |
This is a beautiful peace of work, to me it reminds me of the vast dessert that reality feeds us.... and the only drop of water you recieve... is an emotion that you have to drop your guard to recieve. I like it alot Jamsters Love, The Artist Formaly known as Paul now known as "John the velveeta rooster from Japan" [This message has been edited by Ember (edited 06-13-2000).] |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Well this was sad. I do believe we have guides and they may be resting but would not forsaken you. Embrace them again and together face the future, it is all any of us can do.. I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
JOY 14 ~ Thank you very much for your reply. gothicmoth ~ Thanks for replying to my poem...I was wondering what you would think about this one. Your poems were great...it was my pleasure reading them. Ember ~ lol..Paul..you're too much....but I love it. Thanks braticus Isis ~ I think the same of these guides...but for once I felt as though I had been completely left alone but it was just a moxie...I know that I haven't been foresaken. Thank you Thank you all very, very much! Listen to your heart for it knows the way even when you don't. ~*Angel of Darkness*~ "So what are we, helpless? Puppets? No, the big moments are gonna come...you can't help that. It's what you do afterwards that counts. That's when you find out who you really are. You'll see what I mean..." -Whistler *+Daughter of Darkness+* |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Dark, truly a great read as all of yours. I enjoy the depth of them, the dark side with an inner light. As Isis said they will not forsaken you, but might let you take a few steps on your own. haha, God I know this. Anyway yes I love this one immensely. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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