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sgreybe
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since 2000-04-28
Posts 209
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0 posted 2000-06-13 08:11 AM


THE DAGGER IN MY HEART:

The dagger in my heart
As a thorn in my side
You, me, apart
Nothing, though I tried

Promises, vows
Made lovingly in truth
So tell me, then, how
Can you do what you do?

How can you take away
The one thing that made sense
Now all that remains
Is me from this day hence

Love deepened from a restart
But your love for me has died
The dagger in my heart
As a thorn in my side.

© Copyright 2000 Sylvia Greybe - All Rights Reserved
Dark Enchantress
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since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258
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1 posted 2000-06-13 09:44 AM


It's strange when you read poems that relate to so well it seems as though you could have written them yourself. Although I don't think mine would turn out so well...this was beautiful sgreybe....a perfect expression of your emotions. Well done.  

                             D.E.


 Listen to your heart for it knows the way even when you don't.

~*Angel of Darkness*~



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Member Rara Avis
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2 posted 2000-06-13 10:19 AM


that is sooo true
funny how it seems like if you read someone elses poems about love, it almost always reminds you of your own experiences.

a dagger in my heart
as a thorn in my side
you, me, apart
nothing, though i tried

great expressions, i love it
looking forward to reading more of your poems

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