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Allstaria22
Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 83
MN USA

0 posted 2000-06-12 09:50 PM


It was sad
while you were
away
I cried
many nights
unable to sleep
I tried
to reach you
I tried
to still love you
the pain
set in
and withered away
all my trust
you never came home
you never called my name
then I got the courage
to reach out my hand
and ask for forgiveness
to love you
once agian
but as I try
to love you
I find the things
I never knew
emotions
hidden deep with in
my soul
pain
heartache
yearning
for something you can't give me
it just took
too long
to say the words
and my heart slowly breaks
because
it knows
i don't need you
anymore.



 Isaiah 1:18
"Everyone loves a rose, will you be thankful for the thorns?"

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Click
Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202
USA
1 posted 2000-06-12 10:28 PM


This made me think›››  
               Thank you.

  Click

SpitFire
Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

2 posted 2000-06-12 10:55 PM


~Oh my,...you have brought tears to these eyes with this heartfelt poem.  I can relate and you've done a wonderful job in this expression.  Thank you for sharing this piece of you. Take care. *Peace.
lotharingia
Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany
3 posted 2000-06-13 06:23 AM


I too, loved this poem. Our relationship with  our parents is so important, and it's so sad when it doesn't work out the way we would wish.

 Lotharingia
"For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?"
Tom Holland


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