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Just A Dream |
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Marshall Rowe New Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 5 |
To gaze upon this face I see, Is to challenge truth’s reality, For who am I to think such thoughts, Be still my heart tells me naught. To look into those eyes so bright, Is to see the sorrows of her plight, Tho' not a tear shed in public sight, Rather awaiting the quiet of the night, To look into her heart so pure, To dream of a love that could never be, Is perhaps more than one can endure, For altho' I love her...could she love me? [This message has been edited by Marshall Rowe (edited 06-12-2000).] |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
wow!! this is sooooooooo great!! man if just one man could feel like this about me.....!! welcome to dark!! i hope you post much more!! kynder The years teach much which the days never know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Welcome!! Another true poet has joined the ranks!!! We women go ga ga over writings such as this. You'll do well here hon!! The feelings you describe are normal, sadly most of us never think we are good enough. We should all work on our self and beliefs in self a bit more... Great piece and welcome  I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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bluebrdy65 Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 276Gladys, |
ohhhhhh what a wonderful poem such feeling. Great job Blue |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Welcome to Passions, you really have made a grand entrance here with this poem. It is so romantic and pleasing to the ear. This is more than sweet nothings..it could melt a heart of stone, in my opinion. |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Wow great 1st  hope to hear more soon welcum LOVE ELMO <3 |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Yes, welcome. I loved it too. And any woman wants to know if you love them that much, so if you haven't already, tell her! |
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sash Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 125 |
Woderful poem! Hope that is the way Yur heart truly works and feels, if so then she is a very lucky person...Hope she knows it. ~Sash~ |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Awwwwwww now thats one hell of a dream! Very beautiful and romantic. Anyways (sighs) WELCOME to Dark Passions!! A place like no other.  Take a seat, pull out your keyboard and start typing us some poetry! (oops a lil pushy I am , bare with me )Peace DkW Once there was a darkness Deep and endless night You gave me everything you had Ahhhhhh you gave me light |
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Marshall Rowe New Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 5 |
I thank you all for your replies. If only I could tell her...but alas...after her husband recently passed away at my age...knowing her...knowing him...knowing myself...this is a love that I will carry endlessly and in agony. ((((( HUGS ))))) 'n' Thoughts All |
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