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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738
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My heart feels like it's empty My eyes feel full of tears My head is full of emotion My body full of these fears. |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
a great poem with an evil in comforting words based on a soul and heart of fear's great work keep it up I'm the lord, I'm the havoc, I'm the soul |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Short and very direct...always a favorite style of mine. Once again you've expressed your feelings very clearly and honestly. Well done  D.E. Listen to your heart for it knows the way even when you don't. ~*Angel of Darkness*~ |
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Necro Draconis Member
since 2000-05-19
Posts 115 |
Short but gets the point across. Fantastic  Let nature guide your soul. Follow the path that nature gives. |
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Portia Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 157 |
Unfortunately, you've captured how I feel a lot of the time. Succinct and to the point. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
concise and powerful. ------------------------ "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting." E.E Cummings. "Art is a lie which makes us realise the truth." Piccaso "You do not destroy an idea by killing people; you replace it with a better one". Edward Keating Pablo Picasso ----- |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I've felt the exact same way hon. Well written to display such emotions in so few words. I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Did I miss this one? Silly me! As the others said, this expresses so well those emotions you feel when you are really down. And short I love! (hadn't guessed that one had you? )Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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