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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738


0 posted 2000-06-12 02:59 AM


I like to watch
the bats at dusk,
in ponder,
that they seldom soar...
Frantically,
they flap in rings--
I wonder
if their wings are sore?

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lotharingia
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since 2000-06-04
Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany
1 posted 2000-06-12 06:19 AM


I like that, that's kinda cute.

 Lotharingia
"For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?"
Tom Holland


Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-06-12 11:47 AM


I know mine are...yours too???
*winkie winkie*

time to sleep me sweet serenity ...
your getting batty
love ya me twin
jm


 And it's good that I'm not angry,
I just need to get over,
I'm not angry, anymore
Cry when you cry,
run when you run,
love when you love,
represent the ashes
that you leave behind
~MB20~

"What the caterpillar calls the end ...
The world calls a butterfly"
~Lao Tze Tao~
~Butterflies are meant to be free~



brian madden
Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374
ireland
3 posted 2000-06-12 05:13 PM


heheh ow that was cute serenity, enjoyed it a lot.


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"Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time".

Baltimore Grotto

"To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting."

E.E Cummings.

manic street preachers
"Culture Alienation Borebom and Despair"

"I know I believe in nothing but it is my nothing" -faster MSP

"And you see, I kind of shiver to conformity
Did you see, the way I cower to authority, you see
And my life, it's a series of compromises anyway
It's a sham, and I'm conditioned to accept it all, you see" six by Paul Draper.

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serenity blaze
Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

4 posted 2000-06-13 01:45 AM


thank you much, m'friends...

my first post here in Dark Passions---altho--I should have been here long ago..but then i am perpetually late...

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
5 posted 2000-06-13 07:50 PM


LOL  I don't believe their wings are sore, for dusk is their early morning and they are just starting their 'day'.  So like us they are probably raring to go!!!

 I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



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