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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia 
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Solitude Drowning in this pool of confusion the roar of the water hides my cry. No one can hear my screams. I see you just with in my reach but you do not see me, you do not hear me, you can not reach me. Like you use to. Stuck in the whirl of water Spinning around helplessly I struggle to stay a float. In this endless sea of deception waves try to smother me, to take my breath away, to end my loneliness, They engulf me. Tired from the fight my energy all exhausted. I descending into darkness. My will no longer my own, I surrender to the quietness, sinking further away, I give in to the urge, of total solitude. ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ 6-11-00 |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
This is saddness and desperation to the max. Hope you are ok? And this is just a venting type piece? Honey the imagery was great here, good work  I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
I love the comparison of drowning in the ocean and drowning in life. Very effective! But I hope not based on reality, as Isis already said! Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Wow! A lot of feeling in this - and tears? I too hope you are okay. Take care |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Thanks for your replies. It does have a bit to do with my current situation. If you read I still love you, in open 7 you would get the idea of what I am feeling. Sad, yes, tired, yes, but not to worry my friends this will pass for I really thirst for life. -------------- You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face and show the world all the love in your heart Then people are gonna treat you better You're gonna find, yes you will That your beautiful as you feel.~~~ Carol King |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
I don't really know what to say except I know this pain, and hope that in time your wounds heal. hang in there. a powerful poem, you portrayed the emotions perfectly. ------------------------ "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting." E.E Cummings. manic street preachers "Culture Alienation Borebom and Despair" "I know I believe in nothing but it is my nothing" -faster MSP "And you see, I kind of shiver to conformity Did you see, the way I cower to authority, you see And my life, it's a series of compromises anyway It's a sham, and I'm conditioned to accept it all, you see" six by Paul Draper. ----- |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Kitkat,...you have the power my friend to exhaust me with your work. This is a good thing...trust me. Your writing has taken me for a ride,..right with it. Gosh,...I could feel much emotion in this....much emotion. I'm here hoping that you are alright as well. *Peace. |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
don't you wish they made emotional life savers instead of ones for your mouth, or those life jackets for your body?? man lies lies lies.... destroyer of such good things. i hope you can find a shaft of light in the truth that prolly will hurt you first. funny how it works that way. kynder The years teach much which the days never know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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