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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
hands torn by the roses you found he dozes to the silence of the ocean's eternal symphony Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I liked this, I mean I really liked this, every time I read it I get something new! Kathleen "How do I love thee? Let me count the ways. I love thee to the depth and breadth and height My soul can reach, when feeling out of sight For the ends of Being and ideal Grace." Elizabeth Barrett Browning |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Beautiful *sigh* Great work  I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Yep... another great one Uta! You really know how to write poetry! |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
Another great work of your's. short yet perfect toward the meaning that you get at. |
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Necro Draconis Member
since 2000-05-19
Posts 115 |
Great poem filled with emotion Let nature guide your soul. Follow the path that nature gives. |
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Necro Draconis Member
since 2000-05-19
Posts 115 |
Great poem filled with emotion Let nature guide your soul. Follow the path that nature gives. |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Thank you, all of you! Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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Portia Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 157 |
I wanted to pull this one back up again because it's so good. I loved it. If you read it through quickly, the "he" is the suitor. But if you look at it closely, the "you" might be also. perhaps he tore himself on the roses "you" placed there for him, and now he dozes in contentment? dreaming, even? Wonderful. I love poetry that's so wide open and yet so concise. |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Portia, It is always an honour to read your comments! Thank you so much for taking the time to read and think about my work! Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
Oh my God- How beautiful! I am humbled.......This poem is exellent! |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Mmhhmm,...this one is definately one to read and read again. Great one. I've got these little thoughts just sort of floating around my head. Nice. Take care. *Peace. |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Uta....All the words I have to say about this poem pale in comparison to the words you have written here. Simply beautiful..Hardrock. |
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