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Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

0 posted 2000-06-11 01:19 AM


Do not read this the wrong way I am fine really... all made up.

I thought I was in there with a chance,
Thought I could be your special one,
But alas it never can be,
My world has come undone.

No reason to get up in the morning,
No reason to even breath,
No I'm nothing it's true,
It'll be better if I just leave........



 I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



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lotharingia
Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany
1 posted 2000-06-11 03:31 AM


I've felt like this so often! Thanks for putting that into words!

 Lotharingia
"For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?"
Tom Holland


brian madden
Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374
ireland
2 posted 2000-06-11 06:24 AM


I often wonder about my place in the world and it is quite frightening,  

No reason to get up in the morning,
No reason to even breath,
No I'm nothing it's true,
It'll be better if I just leave........

but I guess it is easier to focus on the smaller details, day to day than try and take in the big picture, but I can relate, sometimes I just want to hibernate.

powerful poem Isis, enjoyed reading this and i am glad to know that you feel fine.




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"Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time".

Baltimore Grotto

"To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting."

E.E Cummings.

manic street preachers
"Culture Alienation Borebom and Despair"

"I know I believe in nothing but it is my nothing" -faster MSP

"And you see, I kind of shiver to conformity
Did you see, the way I cower to authority, you see
And my life, it's a series of compromises anyway
It's a sham, and I'm conditioned to accept it all, you see" six by Paul Draper.

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Irish Rose
Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

3 posted 2000-06-11 09:16 PM


I've had this feeling also, and I'm so glad it wasn't written from a current experience, it is awful isn't it?

 Kathleen

"How do I love thee? Let
me count the ways.
I love thee to the depth and breadth and height
My soul can reach, when feeling out of sight
For the ends of Being and ideal Grace." Elizabeth Barrett Browning


Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
4 posted 2000-06-12 12:02 PM


Thanks Guys!  It is an awfl feeling, we have all had from time to time.  Just flowed out  

 I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



SpitFire
Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

5 posted 2000-06-12 06:23 PM


~Ok Isis,...glad that you put that little info. at the top, otherwise I would have been worried.  You have expressed this situation so well,..it seems you've tasted it before.  I know I have.  Well written,...thank you for posting it.  Take care. *Peace.
kynder
Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida
6 posted 2000-06-12 07:01 PM


you must be such a reliable person in real life, because you never fail to deliver such powerful messages with your words!!!  i love reading your stuff!!  thank you!!  

kynder

  The years teach much which the days never know. Ralph Waldo Emerson

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