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RainbowGirl
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since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023
United Kingdom

0 posted 2000-07-27 06:13 PM


It was hard
to say goodbye
so neither of us
said it...

Instead
we never replied
just let it go
and silently cried

What do you say?
I'll miss you so much
thanks for the memory
let's keep in touch?

No - when love hurts
you cannot be friends
no amount of words
can ever make amends

Ava Maria
Bocelli and Dream
Somewhere Over a Rainbow?
there's no end to the theme

It's hard to say goodbye
as you give all your love
the tears you can't help cry
as you send your parting hug...

Somewhere ... over a rainbow
you and I - destined to be
the time just wasn't right
so goodbye from you
and a kiss from me...

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"If you have built castles in the air, your work need not be lost;
that is where they should be.
Now put the foundations under them."





[This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 07-27-2000).]

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Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
1 posted 2000-07-27 06:20 PM


This is so full of pain..nicely written RG! (amends btw)  
RainbowGirl
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since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023
United Kingdom
2 posted 2000-07-27 06:27 PM


Thanks Sharon..

HUSG

Flower Power
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since 2000-07-26
Posts 29
Ottawa, Ontario, Canada
3 posted 2000-07-27 06:28 PM


I love it!  You have my vote!  
Isn't it easier not saying goodbye at all?  But sometimes I guess it is necessary.

Love,
Stephanie Lafleur

"Can anything be sadder than work unfinished? Yes: work never begun."
~Christina Rossetti

Heather Miller
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since 2000-07-19
Posts 409
Bryan, Ohio USA
4 posted 2000-07-27 06:36 PM


I have always hates "good-byes" This really speaks loudly.
I would rather say till next time but I guess sometimes you HAVE to say "good-bye" even though it hurts.
Good writing, you got my vote.
LITL,
Heather

With God all things are possible.



Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

5 posted 2000-07-27 09:19 PM


You've expressed the pain and love in this very well, Cindy. Well done!

Denise

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