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Solitude

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Tiziano
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since 07-26-2000
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0 posted 07-26-2000 09:57 AM       View Profile for Tiziano   Email Tiziano   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tiziano

In the silence of a windy night
with the stars upon me
pressing me to cry
letting myself be invaded
by the chills

I empty my head in the darkness
but the image of your eyes
takes over once more
with the beauty of their velvety texture.

The depth of solitude
trascends loneliness
wiping off my tears.

Too many dreams went down the drain
for me to believe in life
but there I am
as foolish as ever
hoping for a miracle
a day in which I shan't have to fly
and leave my love behind.



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Flower Power
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since 07-26-2000
Posts 29
Ottawa, Ontario, Canada


1 posted 07-26-2000 03:35 PM       View Profile for Flower Power   Email Flower Power   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Flower Power

You have my vote for this poem!  It's very dark, yet hopeful....almost haunting in a way.  Good poem!
ethome
Member Patricius
since 05-14-2000
Posts 11545
New Brunswick Canada


2 posted 07-26-2000 04:32 PM       View Profile for ethome   Email ethome   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ethome's Home Page   View IP for ethome

"The depth of solitude transcends lonliness"

Great lines in this poem........very well done......there will be another come along..
so write and read life is worth living..
Heather Miller
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since 07-19-2000
Posts 424
Bryan, Ohio USA


3 posted 07-26-2000 05:41 PM       View Profile for Heather Miller   Email Heather Miller   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Heather Miller's Home Page   View IP for Heather Miller

Very good writting.
LITL,
Heather

With God all things are possible.

JOY 14
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since 09-22-1999
Posts 1447
Wisconsin USA


4 posted 08-07-2000 07:31 PM       View Profile for JOY 14   Email JOY 14   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JOY 14's Home Page   View IP for JOY 14

I can see you sitting beneath the stars..good work.

Joy
Jamie
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since 06-26-2000
Posts 3219
Blue Heaven


5 posted 08-08-2000 12:16 AM       View Profile for Jamie   Email Jamie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Jamie's Home Page   View IP for Jamie

very lovely and sorrowful



Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".


Alle'cram
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since 02-28-2000
Posts 1827
Texas


6 posted 08-08-2000 07:45 AM       View Profile for Alle'cram   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alle'cram

I like lots!!  Very solid strong lines.  

"I empty my head in the darkness
but the image of your eyes
takes over once more"
Sudhir Iyer
Member Rara Avis
since 04-26-2000
Posts 7206
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium


7 posted 08-08-2000 11:03 AM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

Well the title grabbed my attention and what followed was wonderful...
particularly
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The depth of solitude
trascends loneliness
wiping off my tears.
---
regards,
sudhir
jamesjiao
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since 04-12-2000
Posts 270
Backwaters of Avalon


8 posted 08-09-2000 07:56 PM       View Profile for jamesjiao   Email jamesjiao   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit jamesjiao's Home Page   View IP for jamesjiao

Very effective use of words, Tiziano!, it's such a sad poem (my personal preference).. I will vote for this one. oo, wait.. i can't? why?..

- James
The beauty of nature is displayed,
not through itself,
but through the creatures
dwelling within its bosom.


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