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Tiziano Junior Member
since 2000-07-26
Posts 14 |
In the silence of a windy night with the stars upon me pressing me to cry letting myself be invaded by the chills I empty my head in the darkness but the image of your eyes takes over once more with the beauty of their velvety texture. The depth of solitude trascends loneliness wiping off my tears. Too many dreams went down the drain for me to believe in life but there I am as foolish as ever hoping for a miracle a day in which I shan't have to fly and leave my love behind. |
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Flower Power Junior Member
since 2000-07-26
Posts 29Ottawa, Ontario, Canada |
You have my vote for this poem! It's very dark, yet hopeful....almost haunting in a way. Good poem! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
"The depth of solitude transcends lonliness" Great lines in this poem........very well done......there will be another come along.. so write and read life is worth living.. |
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Heather Miller Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409Bryan, Ohio USA |
Very good writting. LITL, Heather With God all things are possible. |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
I can see you sitting beneath the stars..good work. Joy |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
very lovely and sorrowful Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
I like lots!! Very solid strong lines.  "I empty my head in the darkness but the image of your eyes takes over once more" |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Well the title grabbed my attention and what followed was wonderful... particularly --- The depth of solitude trascends loneliness wiping off my tears. --- regards, sudhir |
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jamesjiao Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 268Backwaters of Avalon |
Very effective use of words, Tiziano!, it's such a sad poem (my personal preference).. I will vote for this one. oo, wait.. i can't? why?.. - James The beauty of nature is displayed, not through itself, but through the creatures dwelling within its bosom. |
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