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juliet_2u
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since 2000-07-23
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0 posted 2000-07-25 08:42 PM


Softly I was awakened in the stillness of the night.
A mans gentle voice whispered a name,
It wasn't mine.
Fear gripped me.
The darkness seemed to swirl.
Again he spoke to her,
"Elizabeth, my darling, come to me".
My heart was racing now.
Who was this stranger?
And was the darkness masking his face?
Suddenly she spoke,
"Oh yes my love I am here".
I felt dizzy, this must be a dream.
No sooner had I thought this,
When I smelled the aroma of sweet perfume.
My heart began to calm.
And peace then filled my room.
What was happening?
How could this be?
I felt a soft breeze...
And the dialogue began.
Tender words of love exchanged.
Words of longing,
Pains of seperation.
Joy in finding one another.
Death had been defeated.
These spirits were one again.
I blinked as I saw their figures.
And slowly they began to dance.
It was a beautiful and glorious waltz.
Their love had been given a second chance.
And I knew that I was witnessing...
A gift of ghostly romance.





[This message has been edited by juliet_2u (edited 07-26-2000).]

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BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919
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1 posted 2000-07-25 09:43 PM


Juliet...So beautiful, got chills as I read it.  Haunting......Love it.  Bonnie
ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
2 posted 2000-07-25 09:48 PM


A romance from the other side eh Julie...well you get top marks for tremendous imagination and excellent delivery..write on sweet girl!
juliet_2u
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since 2000-07-23
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North Carolina
3 posted 2000-07-25 09:57 PM


Bonnie, I got chills as I wrote it...lol...thanks for the nice words.
     Juls

juliet_2u
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since 2000-07-23
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North Carolina
4 posted 2000-07-25 10:01 PM


Ethome, wow what a compliment coming from you. Thanks so much. And I shall do just that...lol....Juls
Heather Miller
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since 2000-07-19
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Bryan, Ohio USA
5 posted 2000-07-25 10:07 PM


VERY GOOD Juls......Loved it
LITL,
Heather

With God all things are possible.


juliet_2u
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since 2000-07-23
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North Carolina
6 posted 2000-07-26 12:38 PM


Heather thank you so much. This was different for me but it was just there. Love, Juls
Severn
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7 posted 2000-07-26 02:20 AM


What a lovely tale...very rich.

K

AVANTI
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since 2000-02-02
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INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE
8 posted 2000-07-26 03:00 AM


very well written...
nice flow...
beautiful...

juliet_2u
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since 2000-07-23
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North Carolina
9 posted 2000-07-26 09:47 AM


Severn, thank you so much. It was a pleasure to write it. Take care, Juls
juliet_2u
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since 2000-07-23
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North Carolina
10 posted 2000-07-26 09:54 AM


Oh Avanti thank so much. I'm really glad you enjoyed it. Have a great day, Juls
Tiziano
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since 2000-07-26
Posts 14

11 posted 2000-07-26 10:06 AM


Nice work, but maybe, and I insist on the maybe, you should work it out to be a sort story...
Tiziano

juliet_2u
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since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125
North Carolina
12 posted 2000-07-26 10:46 AM


Tiziano, do ya think? Maybe I should do that. That might just be cool. Build a story around this tale, hmmmmm, me thinks me likes this idea...hehe, thanks for the suggestion. Take care, Juls
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