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Lady Love

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ethome
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0 posted 07-25-2000 03:42 PM       View Profile for ethome   Email ethome   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit ethome's Home Page   View IP for ethome


She comes quietly from the daylight
she draws up close with fine perfume.
City sounds fade out of mind
when lady love walks into the room.

She's brings a spell to put you under
an old trick you can't refuse.
Hungry hearts beat like thunder
when lady love walks into the room.

She can glove your best endeavour
and she'll melt you with her flame.
Lonely souls can't find each other
When lady love plays the game.

Dream sailor score yourself a lover
the winds of time are blowing through.
There's adventures to discover
when lady love walks into the room.

She's got a solid gold St. Christopher,
she's from the penthouse with a view
and every eye will drift to her
when lady love walks into the room.

Bartender pour the boys a buffer
it's another highball afternoon.
They just can't stay undercover
when lady love walks into the room

She's got dancing rosy color
she's taking steps on new old shoes
so dream sailor score yourself a lover
here comes lady love into the room.


[This message has been edited by ethome (edited 07-26-2000).]
© Copyright 2000 Eric Lewis True - All Rights Reserved
Heather Miller
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1 posted 07-25-2000 03:48 PM       View Profile for Heather Miller   Email Heather Miller   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Heather Miller's Home Page   View IP for Heather Miller

Cool I really liked this one  
LITL,
Heather

With God all things are possible.

Holly
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2 posted 07-25-2000 03:59 PM       View Profile for Holly   Email Holly   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Holly's Home Page   View IP for Holly

SWEET but with such great flow of emotion! I really like this one myself.   You have my vote!
love & all,
-Holly


I know well what I am fleeing from but not what I am in search of.
Michel de Montaigne

ethome
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3 posted 07-25-2000 10:08 PM       View Profile for ethome   Email ethome   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ethome's Home Page   View IP for ethome

Thank you Heather and Holly for you kind comments, much appreciated..
AVANTI
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4 posted 07-26-2000 03:11 AM       View Profile for AVANTI   Email AVANTI   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for AVANTI

awesome poem..such beauty...very graceful this lady is I have to say...
very well captured...
lovely work

If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves
from which evolves the light...
Avanti Rao

ethome
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Thank you very much AVANTI I appreciate your kind comments........ethome..
Gossamerwings
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6 posted 08-02-2000 03:23 PM       View Profile for Gossamerwings   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gossamerwings

Wonderful!  I love this poem.  

Gossamerwings
dgvarner
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7 posted 08-02-2000 04:23 PM       View Profile for dgvarner   Email dgvarner   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for dgvarner


well written..gotta love it!  

dg


"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you."
-Kahlil Gibran

Janet Marie
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8 posted 08-03-2000 03:34 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

I could eat your rhyme flow and cadence
with a spoon my friend...
excellent, as always...
later-poetically-perfect-gator
jm

There are places inside our souls -
that have never been touched.
There are places inside our hearts -
that need to be loved this much.
~jm~

ethome
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9 posted 08-03-2000 11:37 AM       View Profile for ethome   Email ethome   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ethome's Home Page   View IP for ethome

Thank you Gossamerwings, dg, and Janet Marie, much appreciated.
Sudhir Iyer
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10 posted 08-03-2000 02:39 PM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

Excellent Work, ethome...

My regards,
sudhir...
insect
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11 posted 08-06-2000 11:46 AM       View Profile for insect   Email insect   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for insect

Here's a vote for Lady Love!
ethome
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12 posted 08-06-2000 03:27 PM       View Profile for ethome   Email ethome   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ethome's Home Page   View IP for ethome

Thank you Sudhir and Insect much appreciated.
Jamie
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very nice



Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".


Kit McCallum
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14 posted 08-06-2000 08:29 PM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

What a wonderful description of lady love Ethome! A tale beautifully told!  

Best wishes,
/Kit
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This is a phenomenal poem, I love it! Have to find more of yours to read. I have to come to this forum more often,
catalinamoon,(dark passions)
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16 posted 08-06-2000 11:59 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

ETHome~
How I missed this is beyond me ...
but ... caught up with it and love it.
Really enjoy the movement of it.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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juliet_2u
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17 posted 08-07-2000 08:45 AM       View Profile for juliet_2u   Email juliet_2u   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for juliet_2u

What a lady this must be. You make her sound wonderful. Loved it. Juls
ethome
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18 posted 08-08-2000 05:16 AM       View Profile for ethome   Email ethome   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ethome's Home Page   View IP for ethome

Thanks so much Prometheus, Cantalinamoon, Kit and Marge for your kind comments.
 
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