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L Tiuch
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 151
NY

0 posted 2000-07-25 10:15 AM



I try so hard to be brave and strong
Yet whatever I do seems to be wrong
The love that I need, just isn't there
I've no one to cherish, no one to care
I want so much to be loved, to be needed
Yet warnings, so clear, I let go unheeded
My future looks empty...I'm filled with fear
To be all alone year after year
The love that I feel just will not die
So alone I will be and alone I will cry
I'll keep the memories of times that we had
All of the good, yes, even the bad
The children are mine, at least for awhile
They're good for me now sometimes I can smile
Maybe with time, the pain will be less
The hurt will subside, I only can guess
But the sadness I feel will always be there
As I go on alone with no one to share
My ups and my downs, the good and the bad
Never knowing the love I wished that I'd had
Linda Tiuch



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Heather Miller
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since 2000-07-19
Posts 409
Bryan, Ohio USA
1 posted 2000-07-25 10:19 AM


Oh honey, that was so sad....... (very well put though) You touched me so much and my cheeks got damp  
LITL,
Heather
Keep your eyes fixed to heaven and the PERFECT love will come along  


With God all things are possible.

BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919
New York, USA
2 posted 2000-07-25 10:12 PM


Oh Linda, this just sounds so sad,   full of so many heartfelt emotions.  Thank God you now realize how loved you are.  This tugged at the heart, but is so beautifully written.           Bonnie

[This message has been edited by BSC (edited 07-25-2000).]

jamesjiao
Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 268
Backwaters of Avalon
3 posted 2000-07-25 11:48 PM


Loved the rhyming. you made me think of U2's 'With or without you'

voted!

- James
The beauty of nature is displayed,
not through itself,
but through the creatures
dwelling within its bosom.



AVANTI
Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664
INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE
4 posted 2000-07-26 03:16 AM


well written...
sad but well expredssed

If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves
from which evolves the light...
Avanti Rao


Jon Mewett
Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304

5 posted 2000-07-26 06:15 AM


When love beckons you follow him,but as his wings may enfold you so may he crucify you.

Love is hard but wonderful as well.

liked your poem

Jon

juliet_2u
Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125
North Carolina
6 posted 2000-07-26 10:07 AM


Oh Linda my heart was just aching as I read this. Again you have touched me. Take care and big hugs to ya, Juls
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