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Toddles
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since 2000-07-24
Posts 396
New Orleans, Louisiana

0 posted 2000-07-24 12:41 PM


Go Deeper


Barcelona
was in your
eyes
gleaming
dreaming
beaming
eyes
shy unashamed hungering
eyes
that had seen so few tears
eyes
brown & insatiable
eyes
wide & questioning
eyes
raw & erotic
eyes
that promised
sex without touching
and conquered me gently
blanketing my nakedness
eyes
that wrapped their light
like legs around me
beckoning
go deeper...
Barcelona
beyond pupils and irises
beautiful
windows
to
one
sensuous soul

By Todd-Michael Phillips






© Copyright 2000 Todd-Michael Phillips - All Rights Reserved
Heather Miller
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since 2000-07-19
Posts 409
Bryan, Ohio USA
1 posted 2000-07-24 12:43 PM


Very nice.
LITL,
Heather

With God all things are possible.

juliet_2u
Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125
North Carolina
2 posted 2000-07-24 01:18 PM


Todd, gorgeous work. Very heart felt. Thanks for sharing, Juls
Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
3 posted 2000-07-24 09:34 PM


Todd, welcome to Passions. I've sent you a message regarding the number of posts you've made today. Thanks!  
Toddles
Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 396
New Orleans, Louisiana
4 posted 2000-07-25 02:27 PM


Heather: I have really appreciated your comments!


Juliet_2u:  Once again, you've made my day!


Poet Divine: Thanks for the nice e-mail, keep up the good work!

Tallulah
Junior Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 28

5 posted 2000-07-25 03:21 PM


It's a shame they have to limit post (Although I understand why it is necessary) when I read your work I want MORE, MORE, MORE!!!

This one is my personal favorite of all you have submitted!

Toddles
Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 396
New Orleans, Louisiana
6 posted 2000-07-26 02:33 AM


Well, that is nice to hear Tallulah, I have submitted maybe 10 poems all together and will only be posting a few more in all! I love this forum and am glad that we have such an outlet available to us to express ourselves and to appreciate the work of others and to make friends.
AVANTI
Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664
INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE
7 posted 2000-07-26 03:05 AM


VERY DEEP...
good work...

Toddles
Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 396
New Orleans, Louisiana
8 posted 2000-07-26 06:09 AM


Thanks Avanti: It means more when it is expressed by poets I admire and look up to myself!!!

Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
9 posted 2000-07-26 09:49 AM


Todd - Don't be limiting your total number of posts - Just stagger them more - You'll get more attention, and Ceres will breathe easier...

This poem is certainly indicative of a real talent - Do continue to treat us to more of your good stuff....


Tiziano
Junior Member
since 2000-07-26
Posts 14

10 posted 2000-07-26 10:00 AM


Good work. You really came accross with your feelings and sensations.
Tiziano

Geoffrey Sonnen
Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 142
Reading, PA USA
11 posted 2000-07-26 12:34 PM


Sounds like Passion to me Todd. Your writing was as seductive as your subject matter.

Peace,  Geoff

Toddles
Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 396
New Orleans, Louisiana
12 posted 2000-07-26 04:40 PM


Nan: What a nice Response, thank you for taking the time!


Tiziano: Thanks for the appreciation!


Geoff: Peace to you too my friend!


[This message has been edited by Toddles (edited 07-26-2000).]

michellemckee
Junior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 49
Tucson, AZ
13 posted 2000-07-26 04:45 PM


Can we delete this post as I screwed up!!! Thanks!




[This message has been edited by michellemckee (edited 07-26-2000).]

michellemckee
Junior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 49
Tucson, AZ
14 posted 2000-07-26 04:45 PM


Very enticing, makes one want to be the object of such passion and desire.
You can close your eyes and feel the emotion emanating from this poem. Thank you!
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Dance like no one's watching.
Love like it's never going to hurt.
If it does hurt, shoot em!


[This message has been edited by michellemckee (edited 07-26-2000).]

Toddles
Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 396
New Orleans, Louisiana
15 posted 2000-07-27 02:22 AM


Michelle: Merci Beaucoup!!!

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