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Colors Of Love

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Lone Wolf
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0 posted 07-21-2000 09:16 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lone Wolf

Love possesses many different hues
From a brilliant red to deep blues
Feelings dictate the changing shades
Time may cause the colors to fade

Love usually starts out as pink
When one prepares to drink
For the first time from this cup
With the curiousity of a pup

Love can turn the brightest red
When you can't keep that someone out of your head
Just a look can make you blush
As your blood flows with a rush

Love can take on a pigment of passion
I imagine it to be purple in fashion
It burns with the intensity of a fire
Only one way to quench those desires

Love no longer aflame carries a blue tint
Because on your heart is its print
The mark of a feeling so sweet
You were almost burned by the heat

Love has many other tones
One is always with you even when you're alone
Look around and you will see
All the splendid colors that love can be




Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats
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1 posted 07-21-2000 09:35 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

LW~ This is beautiful, and of course, I VOTED!   -SEA

Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB


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2 posted 07-22-2000 12:19 AM       View Profile for Xeonox   Email Xeonox   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Xeonox

All I have to say is HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).
Heather Miller
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3 posted 07-22-2000 12:31 PM       View Profile for Heather Miller   Email Heather Miller   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Heather Miller's Home Page   View IP for Heather Miller

Very very nice.
LITL,
Heather


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Lone Wolf
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4 posted 07-22-2000 02:50 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Thank you all for the kind words and replies.  

Lone Wolf


Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats
Marina
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5 posted 07-22-2000 11:18 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

i really like this one LW.  Definitly one of your best and a very good selection for the book.

It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley

AVANTI
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6 posted 07-23-2000 12:44 AM       View Profile for AVANTI   Email AVANTI   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for AVANTI

it's been  long time since I read you...
simply great poem...
lovely work

If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves
from which evolves the light...
Avanti Rao

ethome
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7 posted 07-23-2000 05:13 AM       View Profile for ethome   Email ethome   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ethome's Home Page   View IP for ethome

What a great description of love, from the infatuation at the start to the lonliness at the end, the reference to the different colors is marvelous. My vote for sure!

Take care.......ethome..
Lone Wolf
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8 posted 07-25-2000 10:53 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Marina, AVANTI, ethome, thank you all for the sweet replies.  This is one of my favorites.

LW


Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats
insect
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9 posted 07-25-2000 11:40 PM       View Profile for insect   Email insect   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for insect

You colour love
I love colours
Love colours
Lovers

You have my vote.
BSC
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10 posted 07-30-2000 04:18 PM       View Profile for BSC   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BSC

You have brushed a beautiful portrait of love with your poet's pen LW.  A simply lovely piece.  Bonnie
Janet Marie
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11 posted 08-06-2000 01:51 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

I could swear I already voted for this
this is one of my favs of yours!!!
i guess i was remembeing it from open?
who knows  but im dang glad im here to vote now  
jm
Sudhir Iyer
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12 posted 08-08-2000 11:16 AM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

Love can take on a pigment of passion
I imagine it to be purple in fashion
It burns with the intensity of a fire
Only one way to quench those desires

....
Lone Wolf,
I am sure my eyes must have played some tricks....
Janet, you are not alone in your thinking... so glad that I found this back...

regards,
sudhir
Dark Angel
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13 posted 08-08-2000 07:13 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Oh this is lovely indeed, well done LW  
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