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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Love possesses many different hues From a brilliant red to deep blues Feelings dictate the changing shades Time may cause the colors to fade Love usually starts out as pink When one prepares to drink For the first time from this cup With the curiousity of a pup Love can turn the brightest red When you can't keep that someone out of your head Just a look can make you blush As your blood flows with a rush Love can take on a pigment of passion I imagine it to be purple in fashion It burns with the intensity of a fire Only one way to quench those desires Love no longer aflame carries a blue tint Because on your heart is its print The mark of a feeling so sweet You were almost burned by the heat Love has many other tones One is always with you even when you're alone Look around and you will see All the splendid colors that love can be Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
LW~ This is beautiful, and of course, I VOTED!  -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
All I have to say is HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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Heather Miller Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409Bryan, Ohio USA |
Very very nice. LITL, Heather With God all things are possible. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you all for the kind words and replies.  Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
i really like this one LW. Definitly one of your best and a very good selection for the book. It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
it's been long time since I read you... simply great poem... lovely work If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
What a great description of love, from the infatuation at the start to the lonliness at the end, the reference to the different colors is marvelous. My vote for sure! Take care.......ethome.. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marina, AVANTI, ethome, thank you all for the sweet replies. This is one of my favorites. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
You colour love I love colours Love colours Lovers You have my vote. |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
You have brushed a beautiful portrait of love with your poet's pen LW. A simply lovely piece. Bonnie |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I could swear I already voted for this this is one of my favs of yours!!! i guess i was remembeing it from open? who knows but im dang glad im here to vote now  jm |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Love can take on a pigment of passion I imagine it to be purple in fashion It burns with the intensity of a fire Only one way to quench those desires .... Lone Wolf, I am sure my eyes must have played some tricks.... Janet, you are not alone in your thinking... so glad that I found this back... regards, sudhir |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh this is lovely indeed, well done LW |
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