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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada 
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Seek Not My Heart Oh gentle winds 'neath moonlit skies, Do you not hear my heartfelt cries? Below the branches, here about, Do you not sense my fear and doubt? Side glistening rivers, sparkling streams, Do you not hear my woeful screams? Upon the meadows, touched with dew, Do you not see my hearts askew? Beneath the thousand twinkling stars, Do you not feel my jagged scars? Seek not my mournful heart, kind breeze, For you'll not find it 'mongst these trees. It's scattered 'cross the moonlit skies, Accompanied by heartfelt sighs. It's drifting o'er the gentle rain, A symbol of my silent pain. It's buried 'neath the meadow fair, Conjoined with all the sorrow there. It's lost among the stars this night, Too far to ease my quiet fright. No gentle winds, seek not my heart, For simply ... it has torn apart. /Kit McCallum [This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 07-16-2000).] |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Kit; this sad and beautifully mournful poem touched my heart. I could feel the pain in the lovely analogies that you so artfully used. Sigh! Love, Ellie Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kit~ This poem is sheer loveliness. It flows with a grace and beauty that reaches and touches the core of a heart. Do you not know - that it is perfect ? !  Well, it is ! A wonderful piece to read. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Kit! It gives me pleasure to vote for this beautiful poem. Truly outstanding!  |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is a masterpiece, Kit! Absolutely beautiful! Well written! Denise |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
beautifully sad poem you've written Kit I like your style too |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh Kit~ So sad yet so beautiful a very touching piece Kit thanks for sharing Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Kit what a beautiful well written poem. Truly an outstanding touch from the heart. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Kit this is stunning... so very well written one of your strongest poems I believe just perfect!!!! wonderful rhyme and vocab choices very nice read..truly jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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Not A Poet Member Elite
since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885Oklahoma, USA |
Very, very nice. Thanks, Pete |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a wonderful piece, Kit. I hope my vote helps it get into the book! "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
lovely verse... So well written If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
~Ellie: Thank you for the lovely words and sigh Ellie ... much appreciated! ~Marge: Thank you dear Marge ... I'm glad you enjoyed!  ~Poet deVine: Many thanks for the kind words Sharon ... thank you, very grateful I am! ~Denise: Thank you so much for the incredible comments Denise ... very appreciated! ~Rex: Thanks Rex ... love the comment kind sir! ~Tracie: Thank you for responding Tracie ... I so appreciate your thoughts! ~Ethome: Oh my thank you Ethome ... your comments are always so appreciated! ~Janet Marie: WOW JM ... thank you soooooo much for this wonderful response! ~Pete: Thank you Pete! I'm glad you enjoyed! ~Lovebug: I'm happy to see you enjoyed Lovebug! Much appreciation! ~Avanti: Thank you Avanti ... I'm happy to hear you liked the read! Much appreciation to all, /Kit |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Oh gentle winds of Heavens heart bestow thy mercey ... let sorrow depart quite an inspirational read |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
How can pain be so beautifully expressed? I don't know but you did it. This is a wonderful piece Liz |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
This is so beautifully written right from the heart. Going back to re-read and cast my vote! |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
This vote I send to help it mend! |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
~Rex: And voila ... thy bidding is done Smiling now, thanks Rex!~Liz: What a lovely comment Elizabeth, thank you so much, greatly appreciated! ~Eloise: Thank you so much Eloise ... much appreciated! ~Insect: Why thank you Insect ... I very much appreciated the antidote! Much appreciation to all, /Kit |
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