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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... 
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WISH UPON A STAR < !signature-->Nature’s song, as always whispers gently amongst the trees on the ridge. The old owl we nursed three winters ago hoots in harmony from the roof over the bridge. Nature’s melody waifs upon, softly the spring night calm, gently warm. Full moon illuminates the meadow ripples the pool where the frogs are born. Her song stirs the grass like waves or wake of phantom leopard in stalk. We sit in comfort, serene, peaceful as we commune with our silent talk. Humans never seem to fit, excluded somehow, never really part of the song. It's as if critters, earth, even stars would rather not have us along. We sigh in resignation, understanding accept and appreciate as always from afar. Enjoy as outsiders, the symphony of nature whisper, “I love you!” and wish upon a star. bleeding... "Tis ink coming from his arm, Captain!" [This message has been edited by bleeding (edited 07-17-2000).] |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Nicely written. Enjoyed. |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
mm... what can I say??! ^_^ I loved this one bleeding.. Luv, Lynne "He who knows others is wise; he who knows himself is enlightened." Lao-tsu |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is so soft and so beautiful, Daniel! I love it! Denise |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Daniel~ Such a joy to read. The serenity of 'nature's song' is told so beautifully in your verses. 'We sit in comfort, serene, peaceful as we commune with our silent talk.' Heavenly ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
What a lovely poem. Sure makes me think too. You used great imagery in this poem sir.  |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Beautiful..  HUGS |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Very serene...thanks for the lovely images Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
You knew I'd like this one. Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream. Shawna R. Holder Boise, Idaho |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Written with a passion! We can enjoy the serenity of nature, but never quite seem to be a part. Great writing |
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Heather Miller Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409Bryan, Ohio USA |
Very nice. I love nature myself. To go on a walk in the woods and sit and enjoy what God has given us. Who needs movies when you have nature. LITL, Heather With God all things are possible. |
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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... |
thank y'all for the response... sorry haven't posted more timely, my beloved has been in hospital since Monday. Kinda loosing track of time and space for abit... bleeding... "Tis ink coming from his arm, Captain!" |
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Heather Miller Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409Bryan, Ohio USA |
Sorry to hear about you beloved, I will be praying all is well>>>>>>>>> LITL, Heather With God all things are possible. |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Such a peaceful scene you've brushed with your words. Simply beautiful. Bonnie |
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