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Mike
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since 1999-06-19

Posts 2462

0 posted 2000-07-15 01:05 AM

                 I take you gently in my arms, and feel your warm embrace,
                 As light of heaven's stars above, shines down upon your face,
                 I see the glow of all my dreams, within your beauty there,
                 And touch upon moon's silver beams, as stroke your silken hair.

                 I hear sweet music of the muse, we dance throughout the night,
                 Free as the summer winds that blow, our hearts as one unite,
                 You are my goddess, Aphrodite, you touch within my soul,
                 And leave therein a satin bloom, a rose that makes me whole.

                 I feel the splendor of the night, as hear your siren's song,
                 Breathing in your fragrant scent, I capture all I long,
                 For time stands still, my Venus fair, while I am in your arms,
                 The moon itself, in sky above, cedes to your beauteous charms.

                 My eyes drink of your loveliness, soft grace of supple limb,
                 Sweet creature of the welkin blue, angelic seraphim,
                 I kiss the smoothness of your skin, as gaze into your eyes,
                 With soft caress, on feathered wings, I float upon night's skies.

                 The morning star, you are the night, we dance 'cross heaven's floor,
                 Upon the clouds on winds of time, my darling Terpsichore,
                 I sing to you love's madrigal, I'll love you ever more,
                 I whisper softly to the wind, I love you evermore.

[This message has been edited by Poet deVine (edited 07-18-2000).]

Poet deVine

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since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

1 posted 2000-07-15 01:09 AM

Stunning! I'm speechless. This is one of your best (can I vote twice?)

Severn
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since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

2 posted 2000-07-15 01:33 AM

Truly Mike, this is lovely...so passoinate...

voted!

K

ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

3 posted 2000-07-15 08:48 AM

Mike ; This is pure perfection! Glorious
and so heavenly romantic. Sigh, Ellie

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2000-07-15 11:02 AM

Hi Mike...You know I love this one!

Denise

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since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

5 posted 2000-07-15 08:22 PM

Breathtakingly beautiful, Mike! I could sit here and read just this one all night long. *sigh*

Denise

Mike
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since 1999-06-19

Posts 2462

6 posted 2000-07-18 08:42 AM

Ms. deVine, Severn, ellie, Martie, and Denise;
I was remiss in not thanking you for your very generous and gracious comments before the poem slid off into oblivion. Your responses are truly appreciated, I am glad you enjoyed the poem.

(I did not bring the poem back up for votes, so please do not do so, thanks) If a moderator should happen to see this, would you correct the typo in the second to last line... your to you.... thanks.

[This message has been edited by Mike (edited 07-18-2000).]

Not A Poet
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since 1999-11-03

Posts 3885
Oklahoma, USA

7 posted 2000-07-18 09:44 AM

Full of passion, Mike. I liked it a lot.

Thanks,
Pete

wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

8 posted 2000-07-18 10:04 AM

doin backflips here this is a must read yuh yuh

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