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Geoffrey Sonnen
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since 2000-07-05
Posts 142
Reading, PA USA

0 posted 2000-07-13 06:32 PM


Immense electric shadows
  
   perplexing...surreal

Polarized Enigma

   desensitizes "Feel"

Dichotomous visions

   vexing contemplation

A chartless nexus

   nullifying configuration

Crafted Anomaly

   Light & Darkness exist

Through charged non-existence

   opposites persist

© Copyright 2000 Geoffrey Sonnen - All Rights Reserved
Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
1 posted 2000-07-14 11:35 AM


very contemplative indeed!

regards to you Geoffrey,
Sudhir

Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-07-14 04:55 PM




oooh I just love when poets use big words  
very cool cryptic poem here...
perfect rhyme and flow too
reads great outloud...
thank you for such an outstanding
and kind reply to my poem...
your words moved me
take care
jm

There are places inside our souls -
that have never been touched.
There are places inside our hearts -
that need to be loved this much.
~jm~

Geoffrey Sonnen
Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 142
Reading, PA USA
3 posted 2000-07-14 06:34 PM


Thank you Sudhir and Janet.Do you understand what I'm writing about ? If you do, let me know, I'd like to find out ! Just kidding. I know, it's deep. Thank you Janet for your nice words.

Peace,  Geoff

Mike
Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462

4 posted 2000-07-15 09:21 AM


interesting read.  enjoyed.
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