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Marge Tindal
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Easy Remembering
~*Marge Tindal*~

Today you returned
to rest upon my cheek as a tear
After all this time
it caught me in amaze
As I reached up to brush you away
you clung to my fingertips
I caressed you
smiling with easy-remembering
at all the wonderful thoughts
you left with me
It was then I realized
that even though we aren't together
you were worth remembering
Somewhere I think the same song
is playing my memory for you
I just wanted to let you know
it's okay ...



© Copyright 2000 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Sudhir Iyer
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1 posted 07-13-2000 07:21 AM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

"rest upon my cheek as a tear"...
what a line...

what a theme, great poem...

Marge, I think I remember this one being posted earlier by you in open 7, correct me if I am wrong...

Whatever, this one is great wonderful poetry

regards, sudhir
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2 posted 07-13-2000 07:23 AM       View Profile for ellie LeJeune   Email ellie LeJeune   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ellie LeJeune

Marge; this is sooooo romantic and beautiful!
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3 posted 07-13-2000 07:32 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Oh Marge, this is so softly beautiful  
Voted  
Marge Tindal
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4 posted 07-13-2000 07:34 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Sudhir~
You are correct ... and yesterday I
shared it with a co-worker who encouraged
me to submit it for book consideration.
Thank you for your lovely comments.

Ellie~
Thank you honey.
And it happened exactly that way ...
on the remembrance of a song that
brought me a surprising avalance
of remembering.
I appreciate your comments.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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DarkAngel~
You sneaked up on me ...
like a tear did on that day !
Thank you, dear.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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6 posted 07-13-2000 07:53 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

You write with gorgeous simplicity Marge(y)...I can see...

K
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Kamla~
And YOU sweet poet -
just made my day !
I appreciate knowing that
what I write is 'seen' by another.
Thank you.
~*Marge*~



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interesting poem.  wonderful job.

P. J. Kotrch
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A soul once touched is a soul once blessed by love

AVANTI
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9 posted 07-13-2000 12:49 PM       View Profile for AVANTI   Email AVANTI   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for AVANTI

you picked your words and formed it so well
nice flow...
liked it

If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves
from which evolves the light...
Avanti Rao

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EPoet~
Thank you ... I appreciate it.

Avanti~
Actually the words 'picked' me and
fell to the page after a real moment
of recall.
Thank you for liking the flow.
~*Marge*~


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Marge, I love reading your poems! This one, like all of yours that I have read is simply wonderful!
Debbie
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your poetry always puts a smile on my face and a warmth in my heart...
(might be because you write from the heart, *smile*)  add a vote.
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Oh Marge, This is just beautiful, and oh, how those memories linger.  I love this.  Bonnie
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You are such a talented writer!! Thank you!!I wish I could write as well as you.
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Debbie~
Thank you.  I hope I give you many more to read.

Mike~
You do know this poet well.
Within my heart - the best do dwell.

Bonnie~
Thank you, hon.
The memory was as fresh as the day we drew it.

Bustem~
I don't know what to say -
except a very sincere thank you.
~*Marge*~


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This is a real gem, Marge! Very beautifully done!

Denise
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Denise~
Thank you, my friend.

Know what ? ...
This little piece has endeared itself to me -not because it's a great literary work, but because it shot straight from my heart !

I'm glad to share it and am pleased to know that it touches others.
~*Marge*~



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Marge, this is exactly what I was saying about a spark of truth, athough in your case this is a laser beam, and it punched clear through to me. Just beautiful.  
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Marsha~
Thank you for the glowing reply.
I so enjoy what I do and it's so refreshing
to know that it touches others.
(sorry 'bout the 'punch')  
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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VOTE  
Marge Tindal
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Balladeer~
Shhhhhhh !  I won't tell !
You know how much I appreciate you !
Thanks, luv !
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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This one is a definete relating to poem. I liked the part about resting on your cheek as a memory. What a beautiful way of putting it.

Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau"


Marge Tindal
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Temptress~
Thank you for the reply.

I told the story of how this came to be in another forum .....
driving along from work ...
radio played a tune ...
I was caught in a moment of amazement
when I realized the tear that rested
upon my cheek ... bringing a flood of tender memories.

Just kind of sneaked right up on me.
Glad you liked it and thanks for letting me know.
~*Marge*~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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This is lovely Marge!!! Loved it!!  So simple, so sweet!!  Sounds like a treasured memory!!
Bridgette  


"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown
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