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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2000-07-13 07:14 AM


Easy Remembering
~*Marge Tindal*~

Today you returned
to rest upon my cheek as a tear
After all this time
it caught me in amaze
As I reached up to brush you away
you clung to my fingertips
I caressed you
smiling with easy-remembering
at all the wonderful thoughts
you left with me
It was then I realized
that even though we aren't together
you were worth remembering
Somewhere I think the same song
is playing my memory for you
I just wanted to let you know
it's okay ...




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Sudhir Iyer
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1 posted 2000-07-13 07:21 AM


"rest upon my cheek as a tear"...
what a line...

what a theme, great poem...

Marge, I think I remember this one being posted earlier by you in open 7, correct me if I am wrong...

Whatever, this one is great wonderful poetry

regards, sudhir

ellie LeJeune
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2 posted 2000-07-13 07:23 AM


Marge; this is sooooo romantic and beautiful!
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3 posted 2000-07-13 07:32 AM


Oh Marge, this is so softly beautiful  
Voted  

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4 posted 2000-07-13 07:34 AM


Sudhir~
You are correct ... and yesterday I
shared it with a co-worker who encouraged
me to submit it for book consideration.
Thank you for your lovely comments.

Ellie~
Thank you honey.
And it happened exactly that way ...
on the remembrance of a song that
brought me a surprising avalance
of remembering.
I appreciate your comments.
~*Marge*~


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5 posted 2000-07-13 07:36 AM


DarkAngel~
You sneaked up on me ...
like a tear did on that day !
Thank you, dear.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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6 posted 2000-07-13 07:53 AM


You write with gorgeous simplicity Marge(y)...I can see...

K

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7 posted 2000-07-13 08:06 AM


Kamla~
And YOU sweet poet -
just made my day !
I appreciate knowing that
what I write is 'seen' by another.
Thank you.
~*Marge*~



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8 posted 2000-07-13 09:01 AM


interesting poem.  wonderful job.

P. J. Kotrch
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A soul once touched is a soul once blessed by love


AVANTI
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9 posted 2000-07-13 12:49 PM


you picked your words and formed it so well
nice flow...
liked it

If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves
from which evolves the light...
Avanti Rao


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10 posted 2000-07-14 12:28 PM


EPoet~
Thank you ... I appreciate it.

Avanti~
Actually the words 'picked' me and
fell to the page after a real moment
of recall.
Thank you for liking the flow.
~*Marge*~


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Romy
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11 posted 2000-07-14 06:36 AM


Marge, I love reading your poems! This one, like all of yours that I have read is simply wonderful!
Debbie

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12 posted 2000-07-15 09:07 AM


your poetry always puts a smile on my face and a warmth in my heart...
(might be because you write from the heart, *smile*)  add a vote.

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13 posted 2000-07-15 09:35 AM


Oh Marge, This is just beautiful, and oh, how those memories linger.  I love this.  Bonnie
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14 posted 2000-07-15 09:40 AM


You are such a talented writer!! Thank you!!I wish I could write as well as you.
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15 posted 2000-07-15 10:39 AM


Debbie~
Thank you.  I hope I give you many more to read.

Mike~
You do know this poet well.
Within my heart - the best do dwell.

Bonnie~
Thank you, hon.
The memory was as fresh as the day we drew it.

Bustem~
I don't know what to say -
except a very sincere thank you.
~*Marge*~


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16 posted 2000-07-15 08:26 PM


This is a real gem, Marge! Very beautifully done!

Denise

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17 posted 2000-07-16 11:25 AM


Denise~
Thank you, my friend.

Know what ? ...
This little piece has endeared itself to me -not because it's a great literary work, but because it shot straight from my heart !

I'm glad to share it and am pleased to know that it touches others.
~*Marge*~



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18 posted 2000-07-16 05:28 PM


Marge, this is exactly what I was saying about a spark of truth, athough in your case this is a laser beam, and it punched clear through to me. Just beautiful.  
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19 posted 2000-07-16 11:17 PM


Marsha~
Thank you for the glowing reply.
I so enjoy what I do and it's so refreshing
to know that it touches others.
(sorry 'bout the 'punch')  
~*Marge*~


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20 posted 2000-07-16 11:19 PM


VOTE  
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21 posted 2000-07-16 11:29 PM


Balladeer~
Shhhhhhh !  I won't tell !
You know how much I appreciate you !
Thanks, luv !
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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22 posted 2000-07-17 01:25 AM


This one is a definete relating to poem. I liked the part about resting on your cheek as a memory. What a beautiful way of putting it.

Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau"



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23 posted 2000-07-17 01:58 AM


Temptress~
Thank you for the reply.

I told the story of how this came to be in another forum .....
driving along from work ...
radio played a tune ...
I was caught in a moment of amazement
when I realized the tear that rested
upon my cheek ... bringing a flood of tender memories.

Just kind of sneaked right up on me.
Glad you liked it and thanks for letting me know.
~*Marge*~



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Justbleu
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24 posted 2000-07-17 02:35 AM


This is lovely Marge!!! Loved it!!  So simple, so sweet!!  Sounds like a treasured memory!!
Bridgette  


"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

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25 posted 2000-07-17 02:48 AM


Marge easy rememberings of this one...what a treasure   so glad you submitted it
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


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26 posted 2000-07-17 08:00 AM


JustBleu~
Thank you.  
It is a treasure that my heart holds.

Tracie~
Thanks, hon.
It has become a favorite memory of mine.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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27 posted 2000-07-18 09:31 PM


How beautiful!  It's amazing how somethings can jog a memory without us ever knowing what it us.  You have my vote.
Elizabeth Santos
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28 posted 2000-07-19 09:16 AM


I've had my eye on this one, and just got to read it. Another vite, dear, for another gem
Liz

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Oh Marge~ sometimes I wonder if you can see right into my heart, this is something I just had happen to me. Needless to say, but I'll say it any way~ I LOVED THIS!!! voting..... -SEA

Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB



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30 posted 2000-07-19 10:11 AM


Very nice poem as well as the thoughts behind it.

Thanks,
Pete

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31 posted 2000-07-19 12:26 PM


This was so beautiful, glad I got to read it  )
I am really enjoying this page. I just joined last night and am loving all this wonderful poetry.
Maybe one day I'll have the guts to add one.
LITL,
Heather Anne Miller/Gambler


With God all things are possible.

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32 posted 2000-07-20 06:39 AM


LTuich~
Yes, it's amazing the way they come flowing when the heart remembers.  
Thank you.

Lizzie,gal~
You're a sweetie !
Glad you had a moment to read and enjoy.

SEA~
You touch my heart by letting me know I've touched yours.
Thanks ... glad you had your 'Easy Remembering' too.

NotAPoet~
Thank you ... glad you liked.

Heather~
Welcome to Passion's.
You'll find much to enjoy here among
friends and talented poets.
Feel the joy of getting your feet wet and post one ... you'll find it addicting !

Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed this one.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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33 posted 2000-07-20 01:28 PM


*sigh*

"Today you returned
to rest upon my cheek as a tear"

*HUGE SIGH*

beautiful, just beautiful
~H

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34 posted 2000-07-24 11:56 AM


It will be "easy to remember" this one, dear Marge ... beautiful thoughts!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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35 posted 2000-07-25 02:27 AM


XAngel~
You took the words right out of my mouth !
Tee-Hee !  
So glad it caught you in a sigh !
It has quickly become a personal favorite of mine.

Kit~
Thanks so much for the sweet reply.
Hard to forget an endearing memory, huh ?
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Janet Marie
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36 posted 2000-08-06 12:42 PM


I KNOW I already voted for this a long time ago... i dont know what happend...
must of got lost in a glitch or crash???
between ceres and my computer anything can
happen..
either way..Im glasd i checked back....
one of my favs by you!!!
gotta be in the book!!!  
later gator
jm

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37 posted 2000-08-06 07:51 PM


Cherished memories are dredged from the past with these incredible lines....congrats maiden............lovya.>>---------->>W.
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38 posted 2000-08-07 12:12 PM


JanetMarie~
I'm glad you came by too.
This one has become a sentimental favorite of mine also.
Hope that sore throat is all-better.  
Thank you.
~*Marge*~

Dad-o-8~
I would have known you'd like this one, my sentimental friend.
Thank you >>~~~~~~~~>My ~Warrior~
*Hugs* *Peace* *Love*
~*Maiden*~



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39 posted 2003-07-24 04:08 PM



Highlighting this one for a friend to easily locate~



Well ... it might not 'bump' ... but at least you can find it on the Daily Topics page~

Thank you for asking~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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