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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209
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don't know if i want my own insanity down in print *g* but here goes...  i can see insanity from here sometimes my life is so out of control that it is like doing three sixties on an ice blacked highway where excitement reigns a split second kingdom before being overthrown by panic and succeeded by fear... but there i will stop for a moment as you are probably scrunching your eyebrows with disbelief and asking just how would this writer know that? but i do. because i did just that one cold dark night. and so now when my thoughts take over the wheel and the spinning starts and reasoning says turn turn i say turn into the slide you are losing control and fear and i grip white knucked at anything at nothing at all and each time around the too fast approaching headlights of the Road Closed ahead truck get closer and the eyes frozen in fear behind the wheel and i are one as we wait for the impending crash and burn the best i can tell you is don't stand too near because i might not be there yet but i can certainly see insanity from here |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
I wish to see this go to print though... feels great to read this many times over... Corazon, My regards, Sudhir |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
thanks for posting this here.... VOTE extraordinary poetry |
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epoet Member
since 2000-05-11
Posts 291grand rapid,MI, usa |
very complex thoughts from a diverse person it seems like. really liked reading this P. J. Kotrch carpe diem A soul once touched is a soul once blessed by love |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
thanks sudhir and doreen and epoet...lol...I think I like being "diverse" thank you |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Vote! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
hey girl.. glad ya decided to submit this gem... great writing we are all crazy so we wont even notice  jm I think I could need - this in my life If you're gone - baby you need to come home there's a little bit of something me In everything in you MB20 |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
very well written... great poem If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Enjoyed this one!  |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
thanks all .....and now i am off to another insane day at my new job, but lol, i am not complaining, I Love It!!!!! |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
WOW! This is...wow...the style is amazing, Corazon...I love it. K |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
gonna boost this up one last time, today is my last time online this week... thanks severn... |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
wowsers whatta poem! ~H |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Love this!!!!! Bonnie |
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Heather Miller Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409Bryan, Ohio USA |
Very good LITL, Heather With God all things are possible. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I love how you think girl! I'm voting |
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