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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA 
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I am unfolding gently beneath Your loving touch. Becoming I let wholeness breath my petals free. Awareness Sweet fragrant Spirit touching senses into life. Wisdom Giving beauty back to the Universe. Knowing Each petal, sweet miracle of life. Oneness We are hues of color, yet one in Spirits blossom. [This message has been edited by ellie LeJeune (edited 07-10-2000).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
you are indeed a poetic rose my friend just perfect Ellie...perfectly lovely take care jm I think I could need - this in my life If you're gone - baby you need to come home there's a little bit of something me In everything in you MB20 |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Ellie, Please take my vote  This piece is beautiful!! Excellent!Yes, I am here, but I am dead, not alive, my body goes on, my spirit has died and I though alive, feel dead inside. "Rose Petal" |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Beautiful! I could almost smell it!  |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Ellie, Another masterpiece! Your talent never ceases to amaze me! Write On SIS! Dennis :^) [This message has been edited by Dennis L. White (edited 07-11-2000).] |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
A most fragrant rose indeed! regards sudhir |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Brilliant!!! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Thank you, thank you, thank you, everyone for your most gracious replies! |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Oh Ellie you do have a way about you! And your writing of course You got my vote ya do  |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
thanks beck, how sweet of you! |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Oh Ellie what a beautiful, wonderful, lovely, piece. I could smell the fragrance and see the petals opening. This is just so Ellie! Love it, Bonnie |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
This is just as the rose is MOST PERFECT..well done Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
bonnie and traci, I thank you very much for your kind words. |
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Not A Poet Member Elite
since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885Oklahoma, USA |
Very well told, enjoyed it much. Thanks, Pete |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
very poetic! great work! If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ellie~ Such a blooming ! Beautiful ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
Dear not, Avante, and Marge; thanks a bunch for your wondrous replies. You can never have too much fiction; reality can be such a bore |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Your rose encomases many aspects of life, in a few words This is magnificent Liz |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
beautiful poetry. voted here. |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
Ellie, I think that this woul;d make a lovely addition to any treasured book of poems-it's sop lovely--I hope it finds it's way in the upcoming book at passions. David |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Ellie! Denise |
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jamesjiao Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 268Backwaters of Avalon |
Ellie, Magnificent piece of rosy poetry - James The beauty of nature is displayed, not through itself, but through the creatures dwelling within its bosom. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
You lifted my spirits with this lovely verse Ellie ... beautiful! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Heather Miller Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409Bryan, Ohio USA |
What a wonderful way to think of a rose and love together LITL, Heather With God all things are possible. |
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