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Marsha
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0 posted 2000-07-10 07:27 AM


Dream Recipe

First you take a dream
and spin it
Kiss and love it
Nurture and praise it
Tenderly raise it
Watch and tend it
Protect and defend it
Your dream has grown

First you take a dream
and break it
Despise and hate it
Crucify and deflate it
Squash and batter it
Pound and flatten it
Your dream has flown



© Copyright 2000 Marsha Grace Melody Todd - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-07-10 07:50 AM


Marsha~
Welcome to the wonderful family of Passionate Poets.

I like your recipe for building dreams ...
but hope no one has theirs have to fly away.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com



Rex Allen McCoy
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2 posted 2000-07-10 11:19 AM


Sad but true Marsha
Nice first post ... Welcome to Passions
Ask Marge about a dream catcher
... could help ... if you hold the faith ...

Musicmaker1969
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3 posted 2000-07-10 11:47 AM


A poem of very certain truth.  Depending on how you treat your dreams will determine their outcomes.  Cherish your dreams and watch them grow, beat and abuse your dreams and watch them disappear.  Beautifully written.  Welcome to Passions.  Hohpe to see more of your work here.

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netswan
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4 posted 2000-07-10 08:33 PM


Welcome to Passions Marsha!

Sounds sweet, then angry.
Great first post

~netswan

AVANTI
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5 posted 2000-07-11 12:33 PM


welcome to passions...
sad and true poem

If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves
from which evolves the light...
Avanti Rao


Sudhir Iyer
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6 posted 2000-07-11 07:50 AM


Marsha,
WELCOME TO PASSIONS

you have made a nice entry, with a good poem...

my best regards as I await many more,
Sudhir

Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2001-05-30 08:36 PM


Sweet, sweet MarshaLove~
Here you are on the day of your first POSTED poem ....

For months you read and lifted our spirits and then the beauty of YOU came bursting through the door with your lovely poetry, building a bridge to our friendship ...
LOL !  Look who was on that bridge greeting you first ! !

Now I see that,indeed ... Your dream has grown' !

You've left us many facets of Marsha ...
and many bump-up smiles ... LOL !  LOL !
You're the greatest, sweet lady !
Love you~
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                               noles1@totcon.com             

Marsha
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8 posted 2001-05-30 09:27 PM


Margie girl, I know you were there at the first and I think you recall who I was before Marsha came out of hiding. So I know the date for posting my scribbles was not a year as Marsha, Beverley was here for a while before me

Love you Margie girl always
Take care love and warm stuff
          Mushy
          

Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



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