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Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California

0 posted 2000-07-07 11:14 AM



You Walk , I’ll Run


How do you not know me?
I am who stands in front of you

Your eyes see with no depth
I see clearly of you

Our vows were to be in union
You walk alone

I am the one you pledged your
soul safe keeping

You were to treasure the heart
that beat’s for you endlessly

Melodiously was our tune to be
but soured you have made its note  

What is your aim?
Mine was to reach lover’s tabernacle

You appear to be seeking flight
I ask why?

You continuously deny your position
I am left in wait

Your love I declare false
You can’t fight the truth

You want to walk
Well I want to run


By,  Cerenity    


  




[This message has been edited by Cerenity (edited 07-07-2000).]

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Jamie
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since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168
Blue Heaven
1 posted 2000-07-07 11:36 AM


Nice

Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".


epoet
Member
since 2000-05-11
Posts 291
grand rapid,MI, usa
2 posted 2000-07-12 10:23 PM


wow powerful poem.  insightful as to why some peoples' relationships don't work.  really good job.

P. J. Kotrch
carpe diem
A soul once touched is a soul once blessed by love


Geoffrey Sonnen
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since 2000-07-05
Posts 142
Reading, PA USA
3 posted 2000-07-13 07:25 PM


Very real and Heart-felt. Cerenity, I am living this the last 10 months. I am with you. If this writing is your reality, my Heart goes out to you. Wishing you Love that will never leave...
                     Peace, Geoff  *vote*

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
4 posted 2000-07-14 11:54 AM


cerenity,

Very powerful... I can see a surge of emotions here...

nice work!


regards,
sudhir

Cerenity
Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
5 posted 2000-07-14 03:04 PM


Hi Everyone,

Well this surprises me that this is the one that pops up instead of the others,, I much love all of your kind replys, Have a wonderful DAY.

Love, Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

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