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~Enigma~ Junior Member
since 2000-07-03
Posts 44St Cloud, MN |
Was it all a lie I trusted your voice Though of my own choice I thought you spoke the truth Was it all a lie When I saw you cry Through tortures of your youth Was it all in vain When you spoke of pain Have I become the fool Impetuous heart Was wrong from the start How could you be so cruel ~Enigma~ [This message has been edited by ~Enigma~ (edited 07-05-2000).] |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Nicely written!! I like it. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Enigma~ Sadly well done. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Superb my friend. . . Well done. . . ---------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Soo sad but soo well written Well done Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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~Enigma~ Junior Member
since 2000-07-03
Posts 44St Cloud, MN |
Thank you all for being so kind. |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
The lessons of youth, sometimes so cruel, and painful! ~~nice writing~~ |
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