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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois 
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I long for awesome sunsets Someone to share them with, Romantic walks along the beach A passionate, tender kiss. I long for summer nights To lay beneath the moon, Make love under twinklin' stars Or in the park at noon. I long for summer dances In a field filled high with wheat, Or the coldness of a stream Where we could hang our feet. Romantic dinners by candlelight A loving word from you, A warm and steamy bath With bubbles filled for two. [This message has been edited by WhtDove (edited 07-04-2000).] |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Beautiful Becky!! You've got my vote, now if you could just supply that guy for me, I'd be happy!  |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Nice!  The only suggestion I might have is to add an apostrophe onto "twinklin!" KnowwhatImean? |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Careful ... you don't get trampled in the rush wow  |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Beautiful. Very nic. jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
WhtDove~ you deserve all the things you long for........ I hope you get them all! *****VOTE***** -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This is beautiful hon I ditto SEA! Yes, I am here, but I am dead, not alive, my body goes on, my spirit has died, and I though alive, feel dead inside. "Rose Petal" |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Oh Rebecca - How beautiful is this????? What a perfect longing. Bonnie |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Sharon I wish I could! But, hey ask Nan if she's done with Troy yet You'll find em someday, yes, you will!Thank you Chris for letting me know that! I appreciate that much! LOL Rex, a rush? I'll certainly try Thanks!Thanks Jamie! Thanks Sea! I've dreamed, maybe someday. But thankfulness for what I have now Thank you DA!  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
you deserve to get all that you long for, and more...this is sweet... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
you and me and all of Passions make 3...  beautiful and tender Dovey.. lovely wishes of the heart from your poets pen wonderful sentiments take care, jm What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly ~LaoTzeTao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Dearest Beck; i love this poem and it gets my vote for the book! I ditto above and say that you deserve all this and more. This is such a beautifully written poem. Love, ellie |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
dovey, this is by far the best construction in any poem I've seen you write. It is so smooth and natural it is a pleasure to vote for this one..... |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Bonnie you slipped in there on me earlier. Thank you Serenity that's sweet, and I thank you! Janet it's probably the only one I've written of it's kind. I would love to write more these Thank you dear Ellie! I have what I need though Balladeer that's the ultimate compliment coming from you. I loved writing this one, had visions in my head, and it flowed out. Someday maybe I'll get the unction to do another. I'd have to say I had the most fun with this one, out everything I've written |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
WhiteDove~ A lovely poem - full of lovely thoughts. Quite an enjoyable read. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
What a wonderful longing whitedove. A most enjoyable read Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Not A Poet Member Elite
since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885Oklahoma, USA |
Great longing Dove. Makes me want to offer myself but of course my wife would never allow such a thing Thanks, Pete |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I remember this one! Very beautiful, Rebecca! Denise |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Thank you all for such wonderful compliments! |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
*whew* don't we all! hubba hubba! ~Heather |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Sounds like heaven to me...  |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
LOL Heather, hubba hubba! Nan, sounds like heaven to me too |
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bad little dog Junior Member
since 2000-07-08
Posts 38city pound |
wow ... maybe you could take me for a walk in the park Ruff Bow Wow Grrrrrrrrrrr |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Great things to be longing for! And great piece as well! I hope you get what you dream of! Much enjoyed by Irie! ~Sheri |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
LOL you bad dog! Irie thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed reading it, I sure enjoyed writing it |
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