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Lonelypoet
Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 123
Conklin,NY,USA

0 posted 2000-07-02 03:31 PM



  The night so elegant and
peaceful, the moon shining
and the stars so bright.
  Oh, how I wish you were here
on this night.
  I stare at the beauty of the
night and I wonder what it'd
be like to be with you on this
night.

Dreams are the the gateways to making the impossible possible

© Copyright 2000 Chris - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-07-02 03:39 PM


simlpy beautiful
simply perfect
take care, jm

What the caterpillar calls the end ...
The world calls a butterfly
~LaoTzeTao~
~Butterflies are meant to be free~


Flower Power
Junior Member
since 2000-07-26
Posts 29
Ottawa, Ontario, Canada
2 posted 2000-07-26 03:39 PM


I think this is a very sweet poem.  It's so true that we would like to share special peaceful moments with others, and wonder how even more special it would be with a certain person by our side.  Thanks for capturing that moment.

Stephanie Lafleur.  

ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
3 posted 2000-07-26 04:28 PM


Very nice....concise and heart warming...keep up the good work.
Heather Miller
Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409
Bryan, Ohio USA
4 posted 2000-07-26 05:36 PM


Very sweet, beautiful and touching
LITL,
Heather

With God all things are possible.


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