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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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A well springs dream Into my older years she waltzed, On a bridge of words embossed. Across poetic chime and rhyme, That took me to another time. A time of grace and fashioned lace. A time of care and gentle pace. A time of sun and docile light. A time of soft and tender night. That set me in a mental frame. Of youthful young still lit in flame. That warmed my heart in gentle mock. Setting springtime on my clock. It flavored day with scented balm And set my heart in wild alarm. Bringing blitz to breathless pause, And charging words like mad applause. I'd sit in muse and dream of her, Of what she said and what occurred. I'd mull about her news convey, And my place in the interplay. And when it came to say goodbye, The smallest tear would leave my eye. And I would pine the loss of goal, The loss and exit of her soul. And all I wished, was turn around, To live again the lost I found. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ Exquisite from your pen does fall the poetry to charm us all Thoughts fall gracefully from your pen sending hearts racing within The beauty of well-phrased acclaim Oh, sweet poet is thy name Nobody does it better, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
perfect Sy-guy... tender, gentle, perfect...as always later-wise-poet-gator jm What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly ~LaoTzeTao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge and Janet, Thank you so much for the votes, love you both. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Ohhhhhh Sy.... another dream of poetry... thanks for the read.... hugs  K |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
This is so beautiful. Too bad it's just a dream. If it were real, just these words would bring her back. Liz |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Oh my, what a romantic web you weave here and so beautifully written. Ellie |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh Seymour this is absolutley gorgeous!! beautifully written. Yes, I am here, but I am dead, not alive, my body goes on, my spirit has died, and I though alive, feel dead inside. "Rose Petal" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Severn, Thanks for the vote and the Ohhhhhhh. *L* Elizabeth, Now you know who that dream was about. Love Sy Ellie, The better to catch you with my dear. Dark Angel, Thank you for the vote and the gorgeous. |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Sey, loved it. Last line - PRICELESS! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Chris, Just a thanks for the vote. |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Seymour - Such a lovely dream, such a beautiful poem. Bonnie |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Bonnie, Thank you so much. *L* |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Seymour what a beautiful dreamy romantic trip you just took me on. The rhyming was so tight and the words so applicable........take care ......ethome.. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ethome, Thanks a bunch for the kind words and vote |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Beauty lies there within beautiful piece SeymourTracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Tracie, Thanks for the read and vote. |
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