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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
~Resurrection~ Holy Empyrean born of night ... baptized in heavenly celestial light. Forgiveness granted ... a most glorious resurrection, a new path to follow leading in God's direction. Walk on water ... pass thru doors of time ... psalms of healing rebirth ... silence requiem chimes. In a garden of Eden, in a hidden paradise ... in cleansing ceremony, sin is offered up to forgiving sacrifice. Wrapped in robes of gold shimmering, wise men bring gifts of jewels glimmering. Wings on palms grant freedom of flight ... look towards the heavens, witness the circling light. Rites of passage is guaranteed, atonement grants this venial heart freed. On bended knee, whispered prayers and vows, Past memories of pain ... take their final bows. Pharohs and prophets collect a visions sign ... scriptures passed down, their message divine. This poets soul released from midnight's tomb, stationed in waiting, protected by a blessed cocoon. An angel sings her verse of love's undying emotions, prayers are whispered ... promises of devotion. Resurrection grants this gift of healing rebirth, witness the miracle of his creations, both in heaven and on earth. Janet Marie for DeVante'...as promised, with love always. |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Just beautiful JM, a lovely, comforting picture of rebirth. I'd really like to share this with a few friends if you don't mind. Bonnie |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautifully done, Janet Marie!  Denise |
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linda munday Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 315Adelaide, Australia |
Very nice JM... created a lovely ambience, good work. Linda M. |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Beautifully done. A wonderful poem. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Now I am in awe, JM---this is fabulous!!! loved it, loved it, LOVED IT... and love you too...beautiful... |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Beautiful, Janet Marie!!! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Jan* Thank you for the behind the scenes view.... I could see it all and feel the peace that this must have offered. A remarkable read my friend...this is truly beautiful...because it shows your heart and your love. **hugs** |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
This is one of my all time favourites of yours! You definitly have my vote. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
thank you to ALL for your replies and support... Bonnie, of course you may share, I would be honored. take care jm What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly ~LaoTzeTao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
The only thing I would change is to say "the rites of passage are gaurenteed" |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
This was just beautiful and so well written, loved the flow The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
...(voted) --Kess YOUR LIFE IS A TEST It is only a test ... If this were your Actual Life, you would have been given better instructions! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
thank you to all who voted and replied thank you Chris for pointing that typo out for me... I tried to edit but could not..it was after 24 hrs since posting time limit so could any moderator who reads this-- please make that change .... in the 4th stanza "Rites of passage is guaranteed," CHANGE the "is" TO "are" ... THANK YOU!! JM |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Such beautiful writing from that incredibly talented pen of yours. I tip my hat to you! Very inspiring! This would enhance any book! A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
As always, Janet Marie marvelous. Simply marvelous. I am in awe once again of your multiple talents. YOU are poetry, JM! |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
JM, my friend, this is phenomenal...you've left me breathless and in complete awe...YOU are indeed poetry! And I'm voting! *Krista Knutson* "We are not seperate from spirit, we are in it." ~Plotinus~ |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Beautiful |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
Hey, i forgot to check the box...silly me!!! All better now. |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
beautiful writing my dear ~Heather |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Geez Chris ya can't even spell 'guaranteed.' LOL Janet this was remarkable! I remember this one from Open don't I? Well written  |
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Geoffrey Sonnen Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 142Reading, PA USA |
Hey Janet, This is gorgeous. I learned a new word ! Empyrean - highest Heaven. Fantastic! Love the way you write. I think I have to share this with others too. Hope I can find this "rebirth" you have depicted here. Could really use it about now. Peace to you, Geoff |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh, I'm so sorry it took me so long to reply JM ... playing catch-up today though! This was absolutely wonderful! An excellent choice for the book! (click) Best wishes, /Kit |
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shadow of poetry Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 76midwest usa |
this was written by an angel it is so beautiful perfect a stunning tribute to a rebirth of love the first time i read this it gave me a chill it was so vivid of a picture my sister is the poet I am but a shadow by the light of poetry I read then dream |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
very spiritual and soothing....great flow... great words...very well done glad I was able to catch it....GMV.....ethome |
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Heather Miller Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409Bryan, Ohio USA |
Ye I agrre with everyone, VERY BEAUTIFUL. LITL, Heather With God all things are possible. |
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