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Tender Render

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Marge Tindal
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Tender Render
~*Marge Tindal*~

The tender render from your pen
picked me up and took me in
clamoring the recesses of your mind
that I could only hope to find

Within your quill
I feel the thrill
of life colored with your ink
Take me on to life beyond
living on your brink

Drop me on the shoreline
of your castle's built so fine
Let me feel the ocean's roar
tide surging from you forevermore

Lift me to the mountain crest
view sunlight setting in the West
Melting snow on covered hills
unfurl now the daffodils

Spreading chestnut branches wide
shading all you feel inside
Rest with me in hammock made
between the branches of her shade

To the rill of valleys wide
babbling brook of your inside
Enjoin me in the searching foray
of knowing just what you will say

Etched with ink upon my heart
scenes you've stroked will not depart
You have writ upon my soul
tender render of your unfold

Share with me your joy so tender
painted with your indelible render



*My heart-felt tribute to all of the talented poets at
Passions In Poetry




~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2000 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Jamie
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1 posted 07-01-2000 05:45 AM       View Profile for Jamie   Email Jamie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Jamie's Home Page   View IP for Jamie

Sojourners delite!
You paint it so well.
jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".


Mike
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2 posted 07-01-2000 11:04 AM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

Wonderfully written and expressed.
Martie
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Marge--How well you have penned this tender render...superior poetry from you, gal!
Janet Marie
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4 posted 07-01-2000 09:22 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

margie-girl this is perfect...
such perfect imagery and sweet emotions
this jewel is going in to my library
and the book
later-poetprincess gator
jm

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The world calls a butterfly
~LaoTzeTao~
~Butterflies are meant to be free~

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5 posted 07-01-2000 09:36 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Definitely one of your best, Marge!  

Denise
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Beautiful, Marge!  

MagnoliaBlue


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I love you!
Your Lady June~
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7 posted 07-01-2000 10:32 PM       View Profile for BSC   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BSC

Lovely Marge, What images flowed from your words.  Bonnie
Marge Tindal
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8 posted 07-01-2000 11:14 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Prometheus~
I appreciate your reply.

Mike~
Thank you, friend.

Martie~
You know how much I value your inspiration and your friendship.

JanetMarie~
Awww !  Thanks for the glow !

Denise~
So appreciative am I for the wonderful thoughts that are presented by the poets here.  
Sent to my pen from the hearts of others.

BSC~
From my heart to another ... thank you, Bonnie.

~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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9 posted 07-01-2000 11:31 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Marge, the splendor of your tender render is a real mind-bender that popped my suspenders
tracie66
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10 posted 07-02-2000 07:28 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Marge a lovely read...special thoughts of come to mind whenever I enter passions..your one in a million Marge my friend  
Tracie~


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It is the harmony of the universe

ESP
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11 posted 07-02-2000 10:01 AM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

Fantastic, Marge!!!
Beautiful poem by supreme Poetess!!!
It is an honour to post along side of you
And other poets of much talent in these Forums
that burst with potential and love.
Love ya to bits!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie



"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."
Marge Tindal
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Balladeer~
You give me a smile ... I thank you.

Tracie~
Such a lovely thing to say ... thanks.

Lil' Lizzie~
Yes - the talent among these pages touches the heart of this lady also.
Love you, gal.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Severn
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13 posted 07-03-2000 01:59 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

I remember this Marge(y)!!!!

Lovely...and voted for

K
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Lovely weave of expression and feeling Marge

Coco
Marge Tindal
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Kamla~
Glad you remembered ...
I remember the beautiful inspiration I receive from the talented poets here.
This one is for all of you.

CocoBaci~
Thank you for feeling this one.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


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Marge,
I have read a few of your poems now. How do you do it?  I note how many postings you have.... absolutely incredible.  No wonder you have the ability to write so well. I bet this just flowed from your pen, it's lovely.
Marge Tindal
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PoeAy~
Thank you so much for the wonderful compliment ...  the thoughts do flow easily for me as I just let my heart open up and the words come tumbling to the page.

I also am blessed with muses who frequent constantly !  LOL !  Combined with the inspiration I get from reading the talented poets here in Passion's ... shucks ... it's more than enough to handle.  Bet you can tell that I LOVE IT !

Now all of those 'posts' aren't poems ...
I think I only have a little over 450 actual poems on here right now.  But I'm constantly working on them.

Welcome to Passion's wonderful family of friends and poets.
Hope you enjoy your stay ... you will, you know.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


Danny Holloway
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The name of Chapter 1 in the book should be called,  "Marge Tindal"
So many of us stand only in your poetic shadow!
Danny


A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.


Marge Tindal
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Oh, Danny~
You are just too kind.  Fiddle-dee-dee ...
I stand shoulder to shoulder with some of the greatest poets and friends on the web and feel fortunate to do so.
Thank you for such kind words, my friend.



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


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20 posted 08-06-2000 07:32 PM       View Profile for dad-o-8   Email dad-o-8   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for dad-o-8


Unforgetable......thanks marge....never let the quill run dry........


Kit McCallum
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21 posted 08-06-2000 07:40 PM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

Oh Marge ... I apologize for being so late in responding! But I'm here now, and voting (click)  

Best wishes,
/Kit
Marge Tindal
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dad-o-8~
You are such a trooper !
Thank you so much for the trek through
this mountain !

Kit~
You're a doll !
No apology necessary ....
I appreciate you.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Sudhir Iyer
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23 posted 08-08-2000 06:12 AM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

I almost missed this jewel.. I almost did!!!

so glad I did not...

regards,
sudhir
Marge Tindal
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Sudhir~
I'm glad you didn't either !
Thank you ... it is a tribute I did
for all the wonderful poets here who
lend me such inspiration.

Each thought different.
Sach page of the poet so unique.
Each thought shared.
What a joy to be a poet !
~*Marge*~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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