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Poetry's Beauty Tanka

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Honeybee
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~*Poetry's Beauty Tanka*~

5-7-5-7-7

From the heart to pen
such beauty in expression
words dance on paper!
Poetry delights the senses,
setting the weary soul free

By Melissa P. Monette
aka- Melissa Honeybee
© Copyright 2000 Melissa P. Long-Monette - All Rights Reserved
Jamie
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1 posted 06-29-2000 01:30 PM       View Profile for Jamie   Email Jamie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Jamie's Home Page   View IP for Jamie

Melissa,,
That is a very nice poem. I really love it.
Too bad there are 8 syllables in the 4th line however.(not that I am picking.. I think it is great)
jamie


Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".


Danny Holloway
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2 posted 06-29-2000 05:12 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

~~nice Tanka~~  and i like all the syllables!

A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.

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You've described it perfectly!  

Denise
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4 posted 07-02-2000 10:26 PM       View Profile for kaile   Email kaile   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kaile

Voted and i think "weary" just about describes it

regards
Poet deVine
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5 posted 07-12-2000 09:51 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Lovely! Found this gem hiding here!  
Dark Angel
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Melissa, hey I loved this, beautiful!
ethome
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This is beautiful Melissa......very good work!
 
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