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BSC
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0 posted 2000-06-29 09:26 AM



I couldn't miss the intriguing web,
Glistening, encrusted with dew,
The spider's perfect weaving,
Reflecting the rising sun's hue.
It went from rose to railing,
The shape an architect's dream,
Ornately designed in the corner,
Clinging fast to the old wooden beam.
While the master of this creation,
Waited silently for his prey,
With his enticing lure beckoning,
I ran for the insect spray !!!

© Copyright 2000 Bonnie Church - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2000-06-29 01:35 PM


You have my vote for this... as long as you keep that spray away from this bug!

"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
"The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea

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2 posted 2000-06-29 05:11 PM


I bet you are really afraid of spiders, its very obvious in this poem.  You have my vote
BSC
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3 posted 2000-06-29 06:52 PM


Love Bug, Ok, I'll put the spray away...Thanks.  
Thanks Monte, uh, afraid would be putting it mildly.

mini poet
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4 posted 2000-06-29 07:41 PM


My Dad just squishes them with his fingers
Yuk !

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5 posted 2000-06-30 08:46 PM


Splat! Spiders are so yicky *shivers* This is beautiful and hillarious, Bonnie!

Denise

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6 posted 2000-07-30 02:05 AM


BSC,

Very cute, loved this one.

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

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7 posted 2000-07-30 08:20 AM


So now let's get this straight ... you spray the spider ... but you keep his beautiful web

correct?

good one Bonnie

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