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Moonshine
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0 posted 06-29-2000 02:07 AM       View Profile for Moonshine   Email Moonshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Moonshine's Home Page   View IP for Moonshine

Caress me
    with your silken
        luminesce

  gently weave
      your enigma
        your sweet
   soft glow
around me, inside me
and through me

luminate
  the dark
    untrod places
of my soul
       warm the deep
   frozen voids
with your essence

let me yield
   to you
and surrender
   my arms wholly
        to embrace
what I fear most

© Copyright 2000 Jen - All Rights Reserved
wayoutwalt
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since 06-22-99
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TEXAS (it's all big)


1 posted 06-29-2000 02:10 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

the last line was the clincher...big time yes here
Dark Angel
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since 08-04-99
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2 posted 06-29-2000 02:11 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Well Miss Moonshine, this is lovely, so beautiful... Well Done !!  


Yes, I am here, but I am dead, not alive,
my body goes on, my spirit has died,
and I though alive, feel dead inside.

"Rose Petal"

Moonshine
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3 posted 06-29-2000 09:39 PM       View Profile for Moonshine   Email Moonshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Moonshine's Home Page   View IP for Moonshine

Thanx for your lovely reply WOW   I am glad that you liked my poem.

Thanx M, for your lovely reply, your comments and your encouragement - I really appreciate it  
Cerenity
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since 02-16-2000
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4 posted 07-30-2000 02:10 AM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

Moonshine,

Very much loved,

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)
Moonshine
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5 posted 08-03-2000 12:32 PM       View Profile for Moonshine   Email Moonshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Moonshine's Home Page   View IP for Moonshine

Thanx for your lovely reply and comment Cerenity - I am glad that you enjoyed my poem.

Moonshine.
Sudhir Iyer
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since 04-26-2000
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6 posted 08-03-2000 02:34 PM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

A serene poem and like Walt says, the last line was a clincher...

yep, Moonshine,
I liked this one...

regards,
sudhir
Moonshine
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7 posted 08-05-2000 05:55 AM       View Profile for Moonshine   Email Moonshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Moonshine's Home Page   View IP for Moonshine

Hey there Sudhir,

Thanx for reading and replying to my poem. I am glad that you enjoyed reading it.

Moonshine.
ethome
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since 05-14-2000
Posts 11545
New Brunswick Canada


8 posted 08-05-2000 01:24 PM       View Profile for ethome   Email ethome   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ethome's Home Page   View IP for ethome

Oh my, don't I love that last line...the entire work is superb but that last line says so much.....click......
dgvarner
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since 05-13-2000
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9 posted 08-05-2000 04:27 PM       View Profile for dgvarner   Email dgvarner   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for dgvarner

loved this!  

dg

"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you."
-Kahlil Gibran

AVANTI
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since 02-02-2000
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INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE


10 posted 08-06-2000 05:17 AM       View Profile for AVANTI   Email AVANTI   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for AVANTI

lovely poem...
very well written...


If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves
from which evolves the light...
Avanti Rao

Moonshine
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11 posted 08-09-2000 09:34 AM       View Profile for Moonshine   Email Moonshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Moonshine's Home Page   View IP for Moonshine

Thanx for your lovely replies ethome, dgvarner and avanti. I am glad that you read and enjoyed my poem.

Moonshine.
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