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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Magic Rose Gleaming out a chameleon bower, Showering colors, of separate shower, A blue rose, red rose, white rose light, Eloquence, of a rose in sight. While forming dew, on petals' new, Run down to where the nettle grew. Colors devouring, in passions bright, Sensual variations, of its flight, Tribute dower, of rose power, This fantasy, for the hour. And I touched it oh so tender, In the gentlest, of surrender. Whatever its goal, I lost control, My surrender, of both heart and soul, Showing its white and reds and blues, These moods, of magic color hues. The mystery, of the roses might, The sensuous shocking lime rose light. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
How could I not love this one Sy?....I couldn't! |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Lovely poem Sy. Beautiful as the roses you described.  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
And I touched it oh so tender, In the gentlest, of surrender. Whatever its goal, I lost control, My surrender, of both heart and soul, Showing its white and reds and blues, These moods, of magic color hues. The mystery, of the roses might, The sensuous shocking lime rose light. ---------------- a rose written by another poet could never compete... only a rose by you ... could read this sweet  perfect Sy-guy...just perfect later-rose-garden-gator jm you can say baby baby can I hold you tonite maybe if I said the right words at the right time you'd be mine baby can I hold you tonite Tracy C |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
{~,^} Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie, Poet deVine, Janet and Sunshine. I love you all. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Well, I could -- love it, that is.  You rock, Seymour. Your language is exquisite.Mike |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Bsquerril, I'll send you a blue rose, thanks for t he vote |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
beautiful poem... I liked it a lot If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Well done this is so beautifully written dear Sy...I loved it Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ Of course you would have figured out that I would love this ... 'And I touched it oh so tender, In the gentlest, of surrender.' *Sighs of contentment* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Avanti and Tracie, Thank you so much. Marge, Sweet for the sweet. *L* |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Sir Tabin... would that I could write such flowery verse so well. Yours is some of the brightest in the garden. Thanks for sharing. |
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Lady in Red Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 147 |
Beautiful poem....just beautiful....sigh... |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Beautiful poem, beautiful words, beautiful soul!!! |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
exsquisite wording I liked this muchly Sy (my son is a Cy... )~Heather |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Andrew, A huge thank you. Lady in red, Thank you for the vote and sigh. Romantic, Thank you for the beautiful. X angel, Thank you for the exquisite. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Seymour, The title cought my sight and the poetry filled my heart, Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I love this one Oops, musn't forget to vote Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Cerenity, Beautiful comment, thanks Elizabeth, I almost forgot to say, Love Sy |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This is gorgeous Seymour voted |
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jamesjiao Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 268Backwaters of Avalon |
Sy.. Beautiful description of Roses, my favourite flora. I like your 4-2-4-2 stanza structure, very intriguing. Every colour of roses is described well. Give you 10 out of 10. - James The beauty of nature is displayed, not through itself, but through the creatures dwelling within its bosom. |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
yep.. a magical poem. well written. voted. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Ditto! Denise |
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