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Moonshine
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since 10-01-1999
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0 posted 06-28-2000 01:35 AM       View Profile for Moonshine   Email Moonshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Moonshine's Home Page   View IP for Moonshine

Alone in the darkness of her garden
she wilts,
Her once vibrant light
shines no more,
The sweet colours of her petals
bleed slowly from her,
The last shimmer of life
dully ebbs to the cold floor,
And with wounds left unhealed by
the breadth of endless time,
Her frail, broken body finally
crumbles beneath her,
Falling rapidly through the abyss of
slow beating pain,
To the rotting undergrowth where
strong roots of hope once were,
And like a loving mother calling
her sweet child to come home,
The dank, wet earth wraps itself
around her dying soul,
She takes comfort in the cold
and dark of nothingness,
Where nothing and noone
exist anymore.



[This message has been edited by Moonshine (edited 06-28-2000).]
© Copyright 2000 Jen - All Rights Reserved
Severn
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1 posted 06-28-2000 02:46 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Hello Moonshine...  

This is beautiful - it floats...

K
Dark Angel
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since 08-04-99
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2 posted 06-28-2000 03:24 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Wow J, I remember this one! very beautiful indeed!  

Yes, I am here, but I am dead, not alive,
my body goes on, my spirit has died,
and I though alive, feel dead inside.

"Rose Petal"

Moonshine
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since 10-01-1999
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3 posted 06-29-2000 12:59 AM       View Profile for Moonshine   Email Moonshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Moonshine's Home Page   View IP for Moonshine

Hey there Severn,
Thanx for reading and for your lovely reply  
Moonshine
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4 posted 06-29-2000 01:00 AM       View Profile for Moonshine   Email Moonshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Moonshine's Home Page   View IP for Moonshine

Thanx for your lovely reply and comment M  
tracie66
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since 01-18-2000
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5 posted 06-29-2000 06:45 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

remember this one
Lovely with an excellent flow  
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


Moonshine
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6 posted 06-29-2000 09:36 PM       View Profile for Moonshine   Email Moonshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Moonshine's Home Page   View IP for Moonshine

Thanx for your lovely reply and comment Tracie   I'm glad you enjoyed my poem.
JOY 14
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since 09-22-1999
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7 posted 08-07-2000 07:24 PM       View Profile for JOY 14   Email JOY 14   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JOY 14's Home Page   View IP for JOY 14

Mmmm. You've got my vote. Such a sad yet beautiful poem.

Joy
Moonshine
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8 posted 08-09-2000 09:36 AM       View Profile for Moonshine   Email Moonshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Moonshine's Home Page   View IP for Moonshine

Thanx for taking the time to read my poem and reply Joy. I am glad that you enjoyed my poem and also - thanx for the vote too  

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