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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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Alone of you I am the thorn behind the rose you have touched me and bled from me but the rose has only caressed you with its beauty, its charm, with the corners of its mouth turned up, wide it has not kissed your skin as I have. Dark Angel 2000 < !signature--> Yes, I am here, but I am dead, not alive, my body goes on, my spirit has died, and I though alive, feel dead inside. "Rose Petal" [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 06-27-2000).] |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Beautiful, DA!!! I really like this one.  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DarkAngel~ You romantic little thing you ! I like it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Dark, very romantic, love the last line...  Parker |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
I am substance,, you are flash really lovely dark angel jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
I remember this one girlie... lovely! K |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
Truly awesome poem M - you may be as sharp (in wit) as the thorn, but your inner beauty is that of the rose. Well done. "voted" |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
It is wonderful isn't it Moonshine? A wonderful economy with words that speak volumes. jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
hehehe i had a thought but i wont say it i wont! yuh anyways oman i likes it! |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Soft and smoothe... like's it much! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Wonderful DA. . . simply romantic and seductive at the same time. . . Superb. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Sharon, thanks so much honey Margey, umm romantic me!! nope me don't think so Thanks for your lovely reply Haleyja, thank you yep I like the last line too Jamie, thanks sweetie Kamla, thank you sweet butterfly! Oh J you say such sweet things about me heheh full knowing that they arent true HAHAHA kidding honey, seriously thanks so much Hey Walt, C'mon you can tell me!! Thanks hon glad you liked it Christopher, soft and smooth hey? just like the rose in this poem Thanks for your reply Sven, thanks my friend glad you liked Yes, I am here, but I am dead, not alive, my body goes on, my spirit has died, and I though alive, feel dead inside. "Rose Petal" |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
This is darkly beautiful, I like! Corinne |
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Poertree Senior Member
since 1999-11-05
Posts 1359UK |
nope THIS is my fav ..... beautiful and sad M P |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Corrine, thanks so much Awwww shucks MP, thanks so much my kind friend Yes, I am here, but I am dead, not alive, my body goes on, my spirit has died and I though alive, feel dead inside. "Rose Petal" |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
this is so exuisite, i realy enjoy your writing, it's so transparent. Kindly, Redheart Angrybraids |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
this is so exuisite, i realy enjoy your writing, it's so transparent. Kindly, Redheart Angrybraids |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
feel beauty of a rose very nice |
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Geoffrey Sonnen Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 142Reading, PA USA |
Very nice, Miss Dark Angel. I really like your creativity not only in word, but in presentation. That was a cool idea to arrange your words in a floral design in red. Peace, Geoff |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
this was beautiful... and i have to agree that the presentation is an awesome idea... lovely work If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh Little one this is superbly written...well done Love Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
You speak as one with the broken hearted, there is life after love, it's just not so much fun. Take care |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
DA, Wow, love this one. So romantic!!! Just have to vote!! LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
This one deserves another look. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
"with the corners of its mouth turned up, wide it has not kissed your skin as I have." great one DARK! love the last bit the best!! but all of it is wonderful dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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