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dgvarner
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25 posted 08-05-2000 04:53 PM       View Profile for dgvarner   Email dgvarner   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for dgvarner

awesome elizabeth..just awesome...i'm putting this in my personal "favorites" file so i can read it again!!

so well written..and i love the garden theme..  

dg

"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you."
-Kahlil Gibran

jamesjiao
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26 posted 08-05-2000 06:41 PM       View Profile for jamesjiao   Email jamesjiao   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit jamesjiao's Home Page   View IP for jamesjiao

love flows through your poem, Liz, i really like it..


- James
The beauty of nature is displayed,
not through itself,
but through the creatures
dwelling within its bosom.


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27 posted 08-06-2000 10:02 AM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

Man, I should stop in here more often

I love this Liz
ethome
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since 05-14-2000
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28 posted 08-06-2000 10:09 AM       View Profile for ethome   Email ethome   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ethome's Home Page   View IP for ethome

This is another wonderful work Elizabeth, I love how you have used the boundaries of the garden....the reference to Eden is a great example...tremendous work...I've got to vote before I forget...
Elizabeth Santos
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29 posted 08-06-2000 07:32 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

dgarner, What a kind comment, thank you

James, Thank you so much

Jeffrey, Please do stop in often
Thanks

ethome, Your enthusiasm inspires me. Thank you

Liz
Kit McCallum
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30 posted 08-06-2000 07:42 PM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

Oh, I need more time ... I thought I'd already responded here Liz!  I loved this uplifting and inspirational verse ... absolutely beautiful!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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Yu Lan
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since 04-13-2000
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New Zealand


31 posted 08-11-2000 03:43 AM       View Profile for Yu Lan   Email Yu Lan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Yu Lan

Liz, this is beautiful.. such strong feelings, written so deliactely.. such a beautiful ending..
"I would not visit a star
Except to ask it why"

A pity I can't vote on this.. *_^ Tho, really, I'd want to vote on all of your poetry.. ^^

Love,
Lynne
Yu Lan
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32 posted 08-11-2000 03:44 AM       View Profile for Yu Lan   Email Yu Lan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Yu Lan

hey?! Why can't I vote on this if it is a book submission.. has voting finished now..  

^_^

-Lynne
ellie LeJeune
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since 01-10-2000
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King of Prussia, PA USA


33 posted 08-11-2000 07:54 PM       View Profile for ellie LeJeune   Email ellie LeJeune   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ellie LeJeune

Dearest Liz; This magnificent poem was wrenched from the depths of your heart and I felt, rather than read each word. I'm  feeling the pain, in my own small way, and the wonder of how you turn the pain into so much beauty, can only come from God!
                                Love, ellie

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

eL
 
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