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One goal one soul

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Seymour Tabin
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          One goal one soul

The wind that touched your face today
And mine in gentle feel and play,
Embraced us since our very birth,
Forever with us on this earth.

Our breath has touched and joined with those.
In past and present since time arose.
And you and I have touched before
And will embrace forever more.

So do not ever feel left out
And do not ever harbor doubt,
That you and I are tied as one
And never will we be undone.

We all encircle time and space,
We live and die within this place.
We are together in one goal,
We are together as one soul.

The breeze that kissed you on the face,
Has held me in the same embrace.

© Copyright 2000 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Elizabeth Santos
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1 posted 06-26-2000 10:55 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

This is that poem I love with many interpretations, and I love all of them, WE are all bound together, the same breeze touches us all. This is one heck of a poem
Liz
Poet deVine
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I feel the breeze upon my face..I hold this poem in my embrace. Lovely, Sy.
Martie
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So very well put, Sy...an amazing poem!
bsquirrel
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4 posted 06-26-2000 11:55 PM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

I liked this one a lot, Seymour. Even though you didn't repeat the same lines in the first and last ones, the overall effect was that you did. I found the poem very gentle and sweet, and enjoyed your word choices. Thanks for sharing it.

Mike
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5 posted 06-27-2000 02:13 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

The wind that touched your face today
And mine in gentle feel and play,
Embraced us since our very birth,
Forever with us on this earth.

Our breath has touched and joined with those.
In past and present since time arose.
And you and I have touched before
And will embrace forever more.
-----------------
The breeze that kissed you on the face,
Has held me in the same embrace.
---------------

I remember this jewel of a poem...
and I ADORE it...
its PERFECT !!!!!!
the sentiments of those last two lines
are enchanting.
later-gentle-breeze-gator
jm

baby dont you work so hard
for this prize you've found,
it will all be gone-when you turn around,
cause nothing lasts forever anyway.
Rick Roberts
JP
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6 posted 06-27-2000 03:40 AM       View Profile for JP   Email JP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JP's Home Page   View IP for JP

Yep, I was looking for a book submission by the great Seymore...

Add my vote  



Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn.
JP

"Everything is your own damn fault, if you are any good." E. Hemmingway
Marge Tindal
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7 posted 06-27-2000 07:27 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Seymour~
I admire the gentle breezes
that blew me to this place ...
for just a chance to befriend
the man with such poetic grace.

'The breeze that kissed you on the face,
Has held me in the same embrace.'
Love ya'- Poet !
~*Marge*~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Jamie
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8 posted 06-27-2000 07:34 AM       View Profile for Jamie   Email Jamie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Jamie's Home Page   View IP for Jamie

A very nice poem.
Reminds me that we are shaped by those very breezes, and are but the sum total of everyone who has had an effect on our lives.
Thanks for the efflation.

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".


Sudhir Iyer
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9 posted 06-27-2000 12:24 PM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

The breeze that kissed you on the face,
Has held me in the same embrace.

A very Adorable piece from you Seymour...

Wonderful indeed!!!

regards,
Sudhir



Death, be not proud, though some have called thee,
Mighty and dreadful, for thou art not so;

- John Donne


[This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (edited 06-27-2000).]
Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 06-27-2000 01:46 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Once more to all you lovely people above, my humble and sincere thanks.
doreen peri
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11 posted 06-27-2000 03:46 PM       View Profile for doreen peri   Email doreen peri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for doreen peri

Very well written and lovely poem, Sy! I especially enjoyed the closing lines,

"The breeze that kissed you on the face,
Has held me in the same embrace."

You got MY vote!
Corazon
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I am with doreen on this one, the whole poem was wonderful, but I especially love the feeling the ending leaves you with
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*Vote* Do I need to add something? Yes I do, thank you for such a nice poem

The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

Seymour Tabin
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14 posted 06-27-2000 11:06 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Helmut, Corazon, Doreen,
My friends thank you so much.

[This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (edited 06-27-2000).]
Mike
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Finely written sir poet.
Seymour Tabin
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16 posted 06-28-2000 08:46 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Mike,
Thank you for the vote.
X Angel
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17 posted 06-28-2000 05:57 PM       View Profile for X Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for X Angel

oooh yep this is wonderful, so true, and so aptly written.

~Heather
Seymour Tabin
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18 posted 06-28-2000 11:48 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

X Angel,
Thanks for the vote.
wayoutwalt
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19 posted 06-29-2000 02:09 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

SY ive always loved yur stuff...voted i did
Seymour Tabin
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20 posted 06-29-2000 09:48 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Wayout,
I thank you much.
Dark Angel
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21 posted 07-12-2000 08:00 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Oh an amazing poem here Sy. loved it :0
voting

Yes, I am here, but I am dead, not alive,
my body goes on, my spirit has died
and I though alive, feel dead inside.

"Rose Petal"
Seymour Tabin
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22 posted 07-12-2000 08:24 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Dark Angel,
I'm into angels lately, thanks for the vote.
tracie66
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Oh Sy this is so touching, very spiritual indeed   loved it
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

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Simply incredible, I loved it from beginning to end.  Just beautiful.  Bonnie
 
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