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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 06-26-2000 10:34 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Seymour Tabin

                Soon

Do not grieve for me my sweet,
Stay safe and warm your abode.
Taste the good and bittersweet,
Soon I take the homeward road.

I will see you in the spring,
When cherry blossoms line the path.
Wrapping us in beauties cling
And radiance of the aftermath.

Let your mind a moment play
O'er these written words I write,
And they will warm you in a way,
That only words of love can light

It's what I do to keep me sane,
To help me wait the morrow.
I often dream where we have lain,
To lift the weight of sorrow.

Soon my arms will form an arc,
Caressing you with finger tips
Peel away the lonely dark,
Kiss the solid of your lips.    

I can not wait the coming goal,
To hold the other half my soul.

© Copyright 2000 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Elizabeth Santos
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1 posted 06-26-2000 11:04 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

This is my favorite of all of your poems. I'm so glad you posted it, it should definitly be in the book
Liz
Munda
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2 posted 06-26-2000 11:16 AM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

I was waiting for you to post.  
Meadowmuse
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3 posted 06-26-2000 12:19 PM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

Seymour, this Heavenly verse enchants the senses...what a heady concoction! Most lovely...

~ Claire

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau

Sudhir Iyer
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4 posted 06-26-2000 12:21 PM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

Soon my arms will form an arc,
Caressing you with finger tips
Peel away the lonely dark,
Kiss the solid of your lips.    

I can not wait the coming goal,
To hold the other half my soul.

........

A Seymour Classic, this!!!

Wonderful heartfelt words here...

Regards, sudhir.

Death, be not proud, though some have called thee,
Mighty and dreadful, for thou art not so;

- John Donne
Mike
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5 posted 06-26-2000 12:42 PM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

Very nicely done.  Wonderful poetry.
Janet Marie
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6 posted 06-26-2000 12:56 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

why ya make me wait so long baby... LOL  
this one is perfect to reflect your amazing talent and gift of perfect rhyme.
now give me more ...  
later sweet-SY-gator
jm
Not A Poet
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7 posted 06-26-2000 01:24 PM       View Profile for Not A Poet   Email Not A Poet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Not A Poet's Home Page   View IP for Not A Poet

This really is a lovely poem reflecting a lovely thought. Well done.

Pete
Sunshine
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8 posted 06-26-2000 01:48 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Sy, part of this piece sounded as if they had come from the 1800's...when writing was a part of one's life, and postal letters were anticipated so much...

Darn, you're good!

Sunny

~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow.
Helen Keller ~~~

When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ

Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 06-26-2000 03:51 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

I can only humbly thank one and all who voted this a plus.
Martie
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10 posted 06-26-2000 04:41 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Sy, this sweet heart felt poem brought tears to my eyes...it is so lovely.  I'm so glad you posted it so I could give it a vote.
Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 06-26-2000 10:41 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Martie,
Thank you so much. *L* Sy
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12 posted 06-26-2000 11:24 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Glad to see you made it here, Sy....and in such style! My vote is in...
Poet deVine
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13 posted 06-26-2000 11:37 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Ah! At last...a Sy poem!  
bsquirrel
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14 posted 06-26-2000 11:56 PM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

Again, love your word choices. I think it was the cherry blossoms and solid lips that did it for me.   Thanks again.

Mike
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15 posted 06-27-2000 07:38 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

My friend~
PERFECT !
Love ya'
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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with you


16 posted 06-27-2000 10:42 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Seymour~ this is lovely! ***VOTE***   -SEA

Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB


Seymour Tabin
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17 posted 06-27-2000 10:57 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Once again I thank you and *L* to all
Denise
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18 posted 06-27-2000 11:06 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Tenderly touching, Seymour and beautifully written!  

Denise
Severn
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19 posted 06-28-2000 02:44 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Simple perfection Sy...

Siiiiiigh...

K
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20 posted 06-28-2000 11:01 AM       View Profile for Corazon   Email Corazon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corazon

I could ditto all of the above and still not have words to say how beautiful this is
Dark Angel
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21 posted 07-06-2000 06:35 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

I'm glad I found this beautiful piece   now I can vote. Well Done Seymour  

It's been
too many nights
of being with

to now be suddenly
without
"Jewel"
Seymour Tabin
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22 posted 07-06-2000 07:41 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Denise, severn, Corazon and Dark Angel,
I thank you all for your votes. *L*
Cerenity
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23 posted 08-07-2000 12:50 AM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

Hi Sy,

WOW, sometimes I don't know if I could possibly put words to how things affect me, but your poem I deeply enjoyed in my heart, thank you so much for posting it.

Love, Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

jamesjiao
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24 posted 08-07-2000 04:38 AM       View Profile for jamesjiao   Email jamesjiao   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit jamesjiao's Home Page   View IP for jamesjiao

Sentimental and lively, that's all i can say about your poem. I will vote.

- James
The beauty of nature is displayed,
not through itself,
but through the creatures
dwelling within its bosom.


 
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